Black Haiku : Can lost love be found?

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  1. Bootzey

    Bootzey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't stop thinking
    about him... me... us... it... why...
    I want him back.... Now!

    But that can't happen.
    I sabotaged our good thing.
    There's no going back.

    If there was a way
    to get him back without shame....
    I would jump on him/it!

    Lovers of Destee
    help your heartbroken sister
    get her groove back, please!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What's been lost of is
    da standard living we face
    yet it can be found

    Within da heart of
    love and understanding it
    blame be not of self

    Shame aim against self
    in fear but da heart will guide
    both back together
     
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    Is it the groove you
    want back or him
    is he worth it
    are you wishing?

    Just for the groove
    do you thing..but for
    love ain't no shame
    be bold be daring!

    Let your heart be your
    Guide, let your soul be
    your thermometer find
    him.


    Lilpea
     
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    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    I'm Sorry, but I got to get up in here on this!


    $$RICH$$, lilpea
    ,
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:


    Shame aim against self
    in fear but da heart will guide
    both back together


    Let your heart be your
    Guide, let your soul be
    your thermometer find
    him.

     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hindsight sees better
    Than real time, if 2 hearts see
    fit, love will return
     
  6. Bootzey

    Bootzey Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lost love has returned!
    Everything y'all said came through!
    So happy, I cried.

    Thanks for the support....
    Good people here on Destee.
    My family. PEACE!
     
  7. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!



    Bootzey,

    Good for you Bootzey, good for you, your faith to believe in this Community has brought you joy. And for that you are commended!

    Bootzey.....Gotta love the name...Bootzey (Collins:))
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the way you spaced the words in the first verse.
    It made the piece more penetrating. Thanks for sharing.


    Be Blessed!

    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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