Black Poetry : Can It BE? (You're Free!)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, Oct 3, 2003.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    music is playing...no time for delaying...
    its pumping thru my veins...re-leasing the pain......For a change....

    here we go...........................

    yo yo yo

    Can it be?
    that you were wasting your days
    saving your brains
    for something that was never meant to be......

    Can it be?
    that you was outta ya mind
    clouded in time
    bounded by rhyme
    by all things free....

    You let it be.....
    cause you were tired and fed...
    wired and bred
    with bad energy
    that was going to your head....

    now you think.....
    tryin' to seperate the bad
    from the good now you're glad
    that you listened to me.....

    cause i was beat....
    now i'm free from the bind
    no more chain gang vibe
    no more pain thang, lies.....

    so lets continue..........................................................

    Can it be??
    that now you noticed the truth
    focused on you
    cleared ya mind
    now time loves to revolve around you.....

    and you see.......
    you see thru the lies....
    and laugh at 'em
    pimp hand-- and back slap 'em
    turn and reach for the skies........


    Now you're free.........
    maybe not free from the perils of time
    but free.......
    you're free in the mind..........................peace:peace:






    LuRk OnEz...anothaonthaspotproduction!!!!!! haha
     
  2. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin' this...:D:D
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I am free finally estatically magically free!!!!!!!

    You touch upon a point that touches me...to the tune and the fact that I am finally free, like the butterfly out of the cocoon, feeling so good like I can shoot the moon, then wrap it up in ribbons for a present, to give you for liberating me....
    Yes I am finally free, to be the me I have always wanted to be....
    Free to create
    Free to relate
    Free to elate
    Free to elavate
    Free to satiate
    Free to levitate
    Mind over matter, I am as madd as a hatter and I couldn't be gladder , cause I am finally free...Like the old negro anthem....and you know you can't get past 'em!
    Thank God almighty I'm free...
    Blessings On Your House!
    Welcome to freedom , but with freedom comes responsibiltiy!
    BJS(C) 2003
     
  4. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    dude you need to be on da board more...
    this is bang'n
    and i can dig it
    mos def...
    peace
    khasm
     
  5. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I second the vote for an increase on Lurk OnEz...anothaonthaspotproduction :)
    cause this was hot like fried chicken grease lol
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like oh man i like...
    keep it goin dude...
    love the flow
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'd like to see more of u too...this is wonderful...
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is the "only" kind of freedom as far as I'm concerned

    it all begins in the mind

    this flow was tyte as eva...
     
  9. Bluewater

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    feeling
    and grooving to your vibes
    nice very nice
    Peace
     
  10. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!

    This is too tyte. I love the rhyme scheme, u hit it with this!
     
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