Black Poetry : Can I?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rashad, Mar 26, 2002.

  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I...

    Wrap you in my arms and hold you tight
    and caress your body as I envisioned
    last night in a dream I dreamt only
    meant for you and I to explore...

    Imagine you and I reciprocating
    love feeding each other mentally
    Intellectually connecting in the mind
    for I know your strength and you know
    mine.

    I’m the giver while you are the reciever

    I give love as you receive love

    Giving up our bodies to what we feel
    inside as our nature rise
    Higher than the highest Mountain Peak
    I shall have you cum to me...

    If you don’t mind

    Can I...

    Use you as you use me and we could
    be part of an orchestra playing music
    so beautiful that I can feel the rhythm
    of your melody so lovely your body speaks
    as I touch the strings of your heart with
    the stroke of my tongue between your
    thighs...

    Shhhhhhhhhhh...

    “Not so loud”

    “I’m conducting, plus love has got me High”

    And Can I...

    Do the breast stroke with the tips of my thumbs
    in circular motion to your supple nipples as I
    simotaneously lick and suck tasting the sweet
    Mocha you secrete from inside your fountain spout...

    Uhmmmmmmmm...
    How sweet!!

    Then Can I...

    Play with the outside of your cherry with
    the thickness of love on the rise between
    my thighs before I... insert~ retract~ insert~ retract
    slowly and gently I shall do these things
    tickling your fancy as our bodies interact
    with each other generating a tingling feeling
    causing our bodies to cream natures lotion ...

    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
    “And It feels so good”

    But if I can’t, for this is only a dream I dreamt.
    Can I Hold you tight through the night to make
    sure everything is all right?

    Only if ...
    You say I can.

    Now Can I?
     
  2. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot ****!!!!!!

    Yes u can!!! :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
    (Now don't do this to me at work no more!)

    And u said you couldn't write freaky....;)
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad.


    well... umm... see... i almost don't know what ta say! :lol:

    lil brother... you worked dis one... very very well!
    & i ain't just sayin' dat & ****!! :D i lovedid what
    you did on this part:

    Shhhhhhhhhhh...

    “Not so loud”

    “I’m conducting, plus love has got me High”


    :heart:
    Elayne.

     
  4. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dani, U know I don't do this often but..

    I was feelin it so dar she blows!! & why not at work, it might be fun!!:lol: Just close da door & Shhhhhhhh!!:D


    Sunshyne, it's always a pleasure & I'm glad u liked!! Much love Sis!!:heart:
     
  5. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somebody better make sure the door is locked...shhhhh!
    i can dig it...

    Derrick Jay
     
  6. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What u trying to do to me? I already said they
    got their foot on my neck!!! :lol:
    But hey, if this was a soap opera...
    It would be on :)
     
  7. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "I dreamt only
    meant for you and I to explore... "
    lovin that line
    and the whole poem as well keep um coming poet
     
  8. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel ya Boo!!

    If this was a soap opra, I'd be like Victor Newman.
    Running that ****!!
    U feel me!!;)

    DJ, Thanks for reading Bruh! I dig yo work Bruh fo real!!

    Holla!!
     
  9. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lonelypoet!!

    Thank you for stopping through & glad u liked!!
    U have some tyte work too!!

    Keep da flo Yall!!:toast:
     
  10. Danilyn

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    I see it now, you'd come in and knock
    all the **** off my desk, rip my pantyhose
    and tear open my suit jacket, and....

    Oh my ****, I forgot where I was.
    Sorry!!!!