Black Poetry : Can I...............

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Nov 10, 2004.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms Beautiful Thang you
    Ole……… The things I wanna do
    Can I get intertwined, tangled up
    Can I touch you!

    Can I pleasure you with the gift of sensation
    While you grace me with your pressence
    I can touch it,...........
    YOU!
    Can I grasp your essence!

    Can I give you a feeling
    Thats been well overdue
    Can I taste, tease.....
    Can I touch you!

    Mind, body, Soul
    Feeling your mix
    Caressing you
    Loving you
    Committing to This

    Can I grasp your imperfection
    Along with the things that are so perfect
    Can be there for you
    Can I be in you
    Fantasies will surface

    Magic it’ll seem
    Two bodies
    Becoming ONE BEING
    Try me baby
    IM exactly what I seem
    Beggin, But Assuring
    Ill fulfill any dream

    A trip in a night
    Is what it will be
    Utopia, Heaven
    Some places we’ll see
    Can I
    Come on…. Can I
    PLEASE!!
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you love me
    as i need to be loved

    can you take me in the wind
    and confess what it is you
    really want

    can you mold my dreams to fit yours

    can you handle my wants and needs

    can you share in my goals

    will you love me
    mentally
    spiritual

    perfection of imperfection
    i be can you
    are you sure
    do you know what your asking
    because i can be a brat at times

    will you hold my hand
    will you comfort me
    will you withstand all
    the storms we must pass

    can you
    are you sure

    ok i love the vibe...nice work poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was hot and awesome whewwwwwwwwwwww !
    THEONE in da mix
     
  4. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This read like smooth game hehehe
    It made me think of a sista passin you by
    who caught your eye and you just
    couldnt take no for an answer lol :)

    and sista angel...great flow off the vibe of the piece...see brotha THEONE...tole ya folks was feelin it lol :)
     
  5. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hi: Thnks Fam
    Triniti,
    Rich
    SistaAngel NICE DROP, LOVE THAT
    Thnks for the read.
     
  6. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes you may.

    nicely done ONE, feelin it.
     
  7. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can you touch me?
    yes you can
    how many time i have to tell you that your the man
    can you taste and tease me?
    of couse only if you let me taste you first
    the sweetness of your cream
    rushing within the wall of my mouth
    licking my lips as you go down south
    trying to be rough and make me call out your name
    do you need a drink because baby tonight i got game :drink:

    this drop was mmmmm
    Drop it like it's hott!
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I, have a talk... with you
    Can I,
    Make this dream come true

    Nicely put One!
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...you never have to say please
    to a woman after a flow like that...uh huh...
    you probably had her half way through... :wink:

    aaah yes the sweet confection of desire and passion...

    Flame on poet!
    Sage
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    a smooth operator neva has to wait for later...word
    keep dropin da funk my man
    one love
    khasm