Black Poetry : Can I

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Azula, Feb 11, 2004.

  1. Azula

    Azula Active Member MEMBER

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    Can I touch you?
    Imean can I hold your hand?
    Can I feel you?
    I mean can I get into your head?
    Can I taste you?
    I mean can I caress your soul?
    I will be your all and all,
    if you will allow ne a place in your life.
    I will cherish you,
    if you open yourself to me.
    I will love you,
    if you will be with me always.
    So I ask again
    Can I?
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    flow on... :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and the voice speaks
    yes but
    can i
    from the heart
    caress u
    can i
    from da soul
    comfort u
    can i
    from the mental
    feed u
    and taste the
    knowledge of u
    can i
    in reply !

    flow on i like dis
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this bcuz

    its so simple n i can def. relate cuz ive kinda been askin someone that. tyte flow tho...
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This said so much with few words, cause every phrase conveyed the message....I really liked this.
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    yes you can ....it you want....
    yes you can...if you need
    yes you can....

    thanks for the flow..the sharing of the po..em
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so emotive...
    love the flow...
    and the proposal of all proposals...
    :toast: