Black Poetry : Can I?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, Nov 19, 2003.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I take the time to dip inside your mind.
    On a neverending upward climb.
    Through your memories and your pain.
    Back to heartache and love again.
    Moving cobwebs wrought with deceit.
    Teaching us to think swiftly on our feet.
    I see sadness where I never knew it did
    exist.
    I see remenants of your first lover's kiss.
    Dark clouds of sadness of the friendship
    not restored.
    Stars and jibberish when you are bored.
    Past the trinkets of forgotten quests, to the
    heart and soul of your very best.
    I come to wrap my conciousness around the
    true you and there I will find my rest.

    BJS(C)2003
    Blessings On Your House
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this had a beat to the flow...
    str8 flow...flow on sister i really enjoyed this read.. :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u can
    if u understand
    da mental play
    of thoughts and
    leave a hope and
    allow the journey
    not only be mindful
    but felt in heart
    u can ....
    Tyte drop
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AGAIN?!

    1nce again b..you've outshined yaself........this was such a beautiful piece...
    truly written from tha heart huh??i was lovin' tha content here......
    well, well done poet.....

    onelove..........
     
  5. NastaRyder

    NastaRyder Member MEMBER

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    Encore To You

    I really like your flow....sensational reading....Leave you prints in a poem and the world will know it is you.... :driveby:
     
  6. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just a lil something from the heart!

    Sorry to have been absent for such a while.
    I shall do better I promise. I was put on notice
    that I should come and drop...and so to my lil
    women of the Pen...Nana is back!
    Thanks to all who came to read my words and
    experience the depth of my emotions...Thanks
    for responding.

    Blessings On Your House! :D
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU NANA :heart: :grouphug: :heart:

    I knew I could count on ya :)
    and you more than BLEW my mind :eek:
    yes ya can and ya did :D
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  8. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Hey!

    I'm feelin this girl. Keep up tha good work.

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