Black Poetry : Can I

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  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I take just a minute of your time to
    lay down this rhyme that is pulsating my
    mind with your oblivious signs of come
    hitter.

    Can I have just one minute to captivate
    you with my ebony brown skin my
    luscious lips and teasingly mysterious
    eyes that speak a Creole song of romance
    to the poetic stanza I dance.

    Can I just hold you for one more minute
    as I whisper the echoes of sandy beaches
    and sunset reaches of my peach nectar
    that flows flicker lights of neon colors
    like a well oiled projector.

    Can I just keep your hands in mine just
    one more minute as I read your palm and
    plan the future of more minutes of ecstasy
    of you and me watching the clouds roll
    in off the sun dusk sea just you and me.

    Can I have just one more minute???


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes u may
    say it let it flow free
    and when u done
    come to me ........

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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah have forever and 3 days flow and let it free it pleases me to read your work