Black Poetry : CAN I ?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Apr 27, 2001.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    IF U DON'T MINE
    CAN I
    TOUCH U THERE
    CAN I
    KISS THAT
    CAN I
    LOVE IT
    CAN I
    CARESS THAT
    CAN I

    IF U DON'T MINE
    CAN I
    SEE IT
    CAN I
    TASTE IT
    CAN I
    LAY IN IT
    IF U DON'T MINE

    SEE
    I NEED IT
    I WANT IT
    GOTTA HAVE IT
    CAN I?????????

    MY HEART LONE
    FOR IT
    MY BODY NEED IT
    CAN I
    MISS IF U DON'T
    MINE
    WILL U ALLOW ME
    TO COMFORT IT
    IF U DON'T MINE

    CAN I
    BE COMPASSIONATE
    CAN I
    BE LOYAL TOO
    CAN I
    SHO RESPECT
    CAN I
    IF U DON'T MINE
    SEE I NEED IT
    I REAL WANT IT
    CAN I LADY CAN I !
    IF U DON'T MINE.....

    :heart:
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 14, 2001
    Messages:
    2,616
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    Lover of Words
    Location:
    The PeAcH State
    Ratings:
    +4
    $$RICHNE$$....

    can you?... of course you can!! :wink:

    this was nice... it's always proper to
    at least ask... first! you're such a gentleman! :)

    NothinButLove...
    SunShyne~
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    now now!!

    THERE U GO AGAIN MAKING ME BLUSH
    MAKING ME THINK I CAN DO THAT
    U MIGHT FIND ME IN THE PLACE
    U THINK IS YOURS TIL I GET IT!
     
  4. honeyluv

    honeyluv Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 20, 2001
    Messages:
    210
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Business Consultant
    Location:
    champaign IL
    Ratings:
    +0
    yes i love u for that
    just ask and recieve
    to take would be a mistake
    u r a man of love for show.
    thank u sweetheart
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    I AM

    DA MAN OF FLIGHT 747
    MY HEART IS OF LOVE
    I RESPECT ALL QUEENS
    THANX.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    BUT STILL
    U DIDN'T SAY
    YES
    IF I CAN
    SO AGAIN
    I ASK AS
    DA MAN
    CAN I
    IF U DON'T MINE
    JUST IN THIS MOMENT
    CAN I
    FOR THIS VERY FIRST
    TYME
    CAN I SWEETIE
    IF U DON'T MINE
    I FEEL IT
    I'VE TASTED IT
    THE POWER IT POSE
    IF U DON'T MINE
    CAN I .......???
     
  7. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 14, 2003
    Messages:
    6,642
    Likes Received:
    541
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Poet
    Location:
    The Lone-Star State
    Ratings:
    +606
    I like that, comin' on with the direct come on... Go ahead, RICH!
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    indeed if she don't mine 1poet
    i wonder if she don't mine.......
    hummmmm!!
     
  9. suddenpassion

    suddenpassion Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2003
    Messages:
    351
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    Yes YOU CAN!! lol, I love anything that u write.
    Keep it flowing $$RICH$$
     
  10. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 28, 2003
    Messages:
    518
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Student at MHS.
    Location:
    a perfectly blighted planet where soul-searching i
    Ratings:
    +1
    yes, you may, you MAY, YOU MAY!!!

    Yes sir you may!!!!

    :laugh:

    Very well written!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart: