Black Poetry : Can I Trust U?

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  1. mocha-mix

    mocha-mix New Member MEMBER

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    Can I Trust U-2 Bless my thought's
    With intellectual word's that let me truly know who U R
    and who I want 2 B
    when I'm with U
    can I trust u-2 b the blood in my vain
    that flows to my heart-without the flow-
    my heart seets to beat-and I die
    can I trust U-2 bless my womb with brown babies-that R A reflection of U and I
    can I trust U to walk in me-with me-mentally,physically,and emotionally
    can I trust U and U me-so that we can trust we?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U CAN TRUST ME TO BE
    DA LOVE OF THEE
    U CAN TRUST ME AND FEEL
    THE COMPASSION THAT'S SO REAL
    U CAN TRUST MY HEART
    FROM DA START
    AND KNOW YOUR IS CARESSED

    YES U WILL FEEL MY EMOTIONS
    FLOWIN IN YO VAINS
    SECRET WHISPERS CALLING UR
    NAME
    YES WITHIN DA WOMB
    A SEED OF U & I
    AND U COVERED IN A BLANKET
    OF GREAT LOVE DAT'S BLESSED
    FROM ABOVE
    AND KNOW WE WAVE TOGETHER
    MENTALLY
    PHYSICALLY
    SPIRITUALLY
    YES U CAN TRUST ME......................

    I LOVE THIS PIECE AND HOW IT FLOWED CAN'T U TELL...
    VERY NICE ....TYTE
     
  3. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice......very nice..... keep writing and remember keep it real with oneself............ Keep them flos coming......

    Can u trust me?........ The question is can i trust my heart?
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes this is nice
    the big question
    deep from the heart
    Peace
     
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