Quiet Poetry Lounge : Can I tell ...?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticManifesta, Oct 24, 2005.

  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can i solicit your attention
    even though my love signals you
    like a never ever ever.. ending marquee..
    Putting up billboards of my love
    like the virginia Lottery,
    tryna sell you a quik fix to your misery,
    Can I set up a telathon,
    where only I,
    call and donate my heart to you,
    One million times over,
    Can I hold a concert in your name,
    at Carenigeh Hall,
    Can i "whisper in your ear"
    and send shivers down your spine,
    as I tell you goodnight.
    Can I?
    I can do it if you let me,
    Can I?
    Tell you in as many ways
    as I possibly can,
    Can I?
    Tell you that..
    I love you!:blowkiss:
     
  2. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awe...Yes U may, my Poetical Angel..

    Peace!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U can tell me
    wit yo eyes
    speak by
    tongue
    through ya love
    yes solicit me
    whisper as u like
    tell me ya love
    is deep and tight
    yes u can !!!!!!!
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I approach you? My heart delivers! Can I show you? Life is butter when my love makes you studder, dont talk dont mutter, thats butter! Can I kiss you? Have you talking in tongues-Dont diss you-Queen I saw your picture-Can I? Show you-naw you aint ready for that-Im a leave you with this-Spark a flame like a match-Can I ?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    poetic.....i like this and when it was spoken whoaaaaa!
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes,
    I can tell you with my eyes,
    but you might loose your heart
    I dont want to go in for the kill,
    part of this love game is the
    sheer thrill
    but I shall to disclose to you
    my love is deep and tight
    you can love me
    all night,
    until tomorrow is day,
    I have been longing to say..
    I love you!
    :smokin:

     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Can i
    if u don't mine
    intently listen
    can i
    fulfill what's all missing
    can i
    as i hear ya eye speak
    can i
    it fine lose my heart of mines
    in your divine shine
    can i .................................
     
  8. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautifully spoken! I smell love in the air ... And it's every where..
    Good Flow
    Desert Storm
     
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