Black Poetry : Can I take your picture?

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  1. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Would love to trap my finger tips in
    Your root
    Play tango with you brow

    Dance cheek to cheek with the tip of your nose inhale your actions
    Would love to caress your thought process
    To trace a photo of your face with my eyelashes

    To just fall head over heels for your tone of voice
    To stand by and watch you talk to him and him about this and that
    To peer into your eye and see your soul then blink would love
    To place my nervousness next to your heart beat…good morning kisses would love

    To understand your intentions before you do
    To fall in love with you from the beginning
    To end like an open book I want to read you
    ….tarot cards can’t tell you what I know from just watching

    You toss and turn from Egypts' sea side to Paris's door step
    Stones laid the path for me
    To whisper sweet hyperbole in your ear
    Buzzing like the ever talking mosquito

    Would love to create memories everlasting
    Through time change and would love
    To just say hello because even though you
    Know all of this cause our souls meet you have not seen me yet.

    Can I take you picture?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'YES SNAP SHOT
    take mines this was awesome
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OoO, where you been, EW?? I have missed your profound blaze. Flow on
     
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    oh i likes how u wrote this
    nice work poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...To know someone, yet, to never know quite enough, I loved the way you broke this down, wonderful write.
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh that was so so so beautiful poet. Reminded me of falling in love. :luvv:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awesome type...you have wonderful style to your flow...thanks.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is hot i loved it.....
    :heart:
    -story
     
  9. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Challenge

    Insider secert I wrote that about a guy I saw in a bar and I did not even know his name~ I have been challenging my self to fall in love everyday and to try to write about it to get to know me better!
     
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