Black Poetry : CAN I ......Revised

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Can i

    tonight talk to u

    can i

    sweet lady tell the truth

    can i

    be more then a face

    can i

    be someone da heart can trace

    can i

    just be a man

    can i

    share my life worthy plan

    can i

    shower u each day

    can i

    please love u without da lay

    can i

    enter deep in yo mind

    can i

    mentally caress u wit time

    can i

    be honest and compassion

    can i

    do it without a flair in fashion

    can i

    just be real to give sweet affection

    can i

    compromise my loyality of everlasting

    can i

    show u my world of devotion

    can i

    move in da depth of slow motion

    can i

    love yo mental

    can i

    be yo blanket in da winter

    can i

    be yo summer sprinkle of light

    can i

    comfort ya heart throughout da night

    can i

    bring hope & prayer

    can i

    just listen wit care

    can i

    bath u in nudity

    can i

    lady look beyond da booty

    can i

    if u don't mine, express yo worth

    can i

    befriend in GODS name beyond curse

    can i

    share all secrets of fantasies & desires

    can i

    be da flickering flame to ya fire

    can i

    just talk to u

    tell u my life story of truth

    can i

    just respect thy queenz

    can i

    forever cling

    because i am thy KING

    can i ?


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  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Brother RICH
    You have a special touch in your poem
    That invites a respond .:)

    Yes you can
    take a hold of me
    yes you can
    set my passion free
    yes you can
    be honest and deep
    yes you can
    speak as you please
    yes you can
    trust me with your heart
    yes you can
    my humble sweethart
    yes you can
    be my powerful King
    yes you can
    because you make my heart sing
    yes you can
    unlock the door
    yes you can
    ask me for more
    yes you can
    be my defender
    yes you can
    come home for dinner :)

    Much love my brother
    Awesome poem

    Peace & Love
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man bluewater took the words out of my mouth. i will be back to hit this !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This earnest plea flowed like a compassionate river. I bet this would sound great spoken. Enjoyed the flow back by Bluewater too.
     
  5. smoothsoul

    smoothsoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WoW

    Yo Man as always, Your flow is hot like fire! Flow on Bro, Flow on........
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sister Bluewaters..........
    Allow me
    to enter your world
    let me
    cuddle u girl
    allow me
    to rise in his glory
    let me
    tell this sweet story
    can i
    continue to love u
    can i
    forever comfort u
    can i
    befriendz in foreverness
    let me
    bring us this togetherness
    can i
    embrace your heart
    can i
    express yo soul
    can i
    my sweet lady have & to hold
    can i
    let da spirit free
    allow me
    sing to thee
    yes
    beyond the silver line
    and not under sheets
    can i
    just live inside your mold
    can i
    tell how ya truely gold
    allow me
    my queen to spread my
    wingz.
    Thankz a million my love for the beauty u pose within ya.

    Be sure to do that sister Nevar forth i'll be waiting
    thankz for da visit

    Watz u really think it would sound nice sis thank u and for u
    i will come like it flow in spoken words ya warmth i can
    forever embrace ......kisses

    Smoothsoul.........
    I am very humble for your words and grace Thank u and i'll
    continue to do my best to bring you joy reading me if i can.
     
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