Black Poetry : can i pimp my pen? (from da archives)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dnommo, Jul 17, 2001.

  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I pimp my pen when the sun escapes from the dawn?
    Can I pimp my pen when dew drops on the early morn'?
    Can I pimp my pen when the fly cuties walk by, yet,
    Can I pimp my pen to make you all realize the way I
    can visualize your dreams by releasing them from the
    tip of my pen to soak into the cloth if life creating
    illusionary tactics man calls "poems"?

    Training verbs to be nouns, objective into subjective,
    adjective into predicative, so that you can comprehend
    that my pen controls the intersection of "Thoughts" and
    "Dreams" telling all customers that the price for pleasure
    is their unclaimed wishes. Can I pimp my pen?

    can I pimp my pen when I see you
    walking alone, head strung in the sky,
    wishing that it is I, you are so absorbed in?

    can I illicit your dreams by manipulating your heart to
    refocus its attention on to me instead of another?

    shall I sway you my way by injecting my desires into
    yours so that you will think you had the idea first?
    Maybe, I should carry your heart on a verb covered raft
    floating down the stream of love only to discover that
    the one you seek is not the one you desire?

    Can I pimp my pen to create a demand for the supply of emotions
    I create when you read my false projection of devotion?

    can I pimp my pen to arouse in you a lust for one
    who express thoughts and emotions as a sign of
    commitment for one who he sees through release
    of the ink describing his thoughts?

    can I write you to an orgasmic, excuse me,
    climatic conclusion to an experience of
    masturbation through exasperation of adjectives?

    I ask you... can I pimp my pen?
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAN!!

    DO WHAT EVER U WISH
    YA PEN IS MIGHTY
    LADIES LOOK OUT FOR DA PEN PIMP!!:lol: :spin: :lol:
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i feel

    you can son

    and pimping ain't easy


    <DSS>


    but somebody got to do it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed the pen pimp back to the top
    to rock waves make body crave
    it's hot !!! check it out ..................
     
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    Well now, that pen has been getting a work out for a while it seems...lol. You're right on time bringing this back, Rich, it didn't get that much love. Don't know if you can pimp your pen, but you can sure make it flow.
     
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    OH MY :jawdrop: ok wait lemme go calm down LOL from the "archives" my brotha? wow...good lookin out RIch this was jus :eeek: :)
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just wanted y'all to see i'm still breathin'...:ghost: i'm poppin' my head in to see all the great poets...:car:
     
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    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Hey dude. Loooooong time no see:bully:
     
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    dnommo:
    Please pimp yo pen, pimp yo pen.
    I enjoyed this immensely.:)
    As a matter of fact I think I'm going to
    read it again.


    Much Luv
     
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