Black Poetry : can i make like to you...deeply

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can I Make LIKE To You...Deeply

    Do I have to be IN LOVE with you
    To be consumed with passion…for you

    Can I just be
    IN LIKE
    With you

    Can I hold you
    T.…………
    I…………
    G….…….
    H………
    T..……..
    L…….
    Y……
    With mighty hugs of want

    Do I have an effect on you?

    Is there a
    TINGLING
    In your mountains of joy
    Or your venus mound

    Whenever I’m around

    Can I keep you In highest esteem
    Even though it seems
    I’m after your
    River of pleasure

    I’m actually after your
    H E A R T
    And all the LIKE
    You can impart on me

    Can
    I
    Make
    LIKE
    To
    You

    You know…like lovers do

    Can I fill the
    Yearning
    Of your soul
    With the
    Core
    Of my being

    Can I just make
    LIKE To you
    Deeply
    Discreetly
    Ssshhhush…
    {{{I won’t tell}}}

    Can I…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she can't so no to this like !!!
    tyte write
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    lol

    you got me

    this was bangin' man
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dont think anyone can resist making like to you after this
    i can make love some other time but right now i want some of that like
     
  5. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller:
    I guess we have to start some where?

    You can make like to me
    exactly like you want to
    your going to enjoy it
    and be unable to ignore
    the fact that making like to me
    was all that you imagined and more
    then you will realize that
    making like to me
    just wont do for you
    you will start loosing your mind
    because you wasted all that precious time
    pretending you wanted to make like to me
    when you really wanted to make love
    and since you’re the one that said
    you only wanted to make like
    although I know
    you really want to make love
    I will have to make you suffer
    and give you what you asked for
    instead of what you really want
    4EVER’s sensually seductive
    never in a haste Luv
    that sends your mind and body
    to a place that’s far beyond outer space
    Pleasingly yummy to your taste
    But since you want to make like to me
    I guess you wont get none
     
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    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller, This was some cleaver Shhhhh. Your skill is amazing...Really got me thinking of a different kind of sensitive guy.....Loving your flow...
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Baller...

    :wave:
    You make, making like... deeply, sound like love.

    Diggin your words as always!

    4Ever, I dig that flow, especially the last line.


    MaddSistahlyLoveAlways!
    Coco:heart:
     
  8. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now...poets

    ...tell me you've never felt this way...that this one person you've admired from afar...that you've always thought of getting with but could never seem to get to that point...coz, deep down, you knew you couldn't love her/him--be it because of some flaws, or whatever--but you just wanted to LIKE her/him to death. TELL ME I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE TO HAVE FELT LIKE THAT.:)

    THANKS for reading.
     
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