Black Poetry : CAN I LOVE U IF I WANT

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Can I
    love you no matter who you are
    even if you have a hard or soft heart
    Can I
    accept the notion of what you feel
    befriends beyond da tongue kill
    Can I
    if i like try to understand your place
    ova da look you pose on your face
    Can I
    love all my brothers and sisters
    even if some are mentally confused
    been abused and taken /used
    Can I
    speak/teach and preech from da depth of my soul
    beyond being called out or judged even molded
    Can I
    love you if i want, while you hate me for being myself
    love the spirit of awareness without being deep conscious
    can I
    lift my spirit in prayer even if you don't hold the same faith
    or do we share the same grace in this living space
    Can I
    manifest hope that behold someday the key
    come together and start talking we
    Can I
    love you beyond flirtation or sensuality or strings tied
    but from a mental attraction of who you are

    Tell me if i can't because i'm not like you
    i don't wear an ego so strong or because u feel i don't belong
    maybe cause my heart is real and the love my soul feel
    for my own no matter who they be , where they going
    or how they live my love for them still remain real
    Can I
    just once ensert my blackaration
    without declaration or be called an imitation
    Can I !
    :(

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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    True words of compassion, love and strength. It is hard to stand strong, amoungst "tongues that kill."
    Nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Big thankz and true the tongue can kill ya and all that you work for
    I FEEL LIFTED .........and relief
     
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    butterfly#1 going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    True, so true...the tongue takes us where we want to go and yet cuts so deep into our souls...the tongue, a powerful SWORD!!
     
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    like an double edge it can be our greatest down fall thank you sister for the visit
    inside my mental and heart
     
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    No better love then black love
    a love for thy brother & sister
    the love that agrees when disagreeing
    this love to know the differents
    beyond da blade of da tongue

    where has it gone that love i spread
    a love that is like something we never had
    the love one will take at night to bed
    then us it to fine true love to be wedd
    so can i just love you for you & befriends
     
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    Can I Love You through the Forces
    Become addicted to your Energy
    Feel You through the clouds of 9 eyes
    Then meet and befriend
    Can I Know tht You where meant to be the One for Me
    Without realizing who sent you to Me
    In order to become One
    Can I respect the Nautrality of the differnces tht will always be there
    See right in your organs and recongnize your all about Me
    Will this ever Be real and looked at through the Forces of our
    Unpredictable but always able
    Love
    Can I?
     
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    befriend me into a norm untouched and beyond
    yes you can if you will so we can bring peace be still
    share a love of truth set sail for what anew
    know that i am he for thy eyes to see
    yes you can respect da differences of nautrality
    and bring da unpredictable to a reality tree
    yes you can share inside my devotion
    where we can sing such hope & gospel explosion
    bring da past and future together to a now
    and hear my voice of love sound
    so one's soul can mound into a ride of us
    yes u can !!!
     
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    can i love you if i want
    even though destiny by fate has failed
    but the memories of foreverness
    remain and still make me smile
    for true love has too much energy to die
    but sometimes it flies away to hybernate
    so that it can be reborn as something else
    entirely that can still touch a heart
    and still make this woman weep with joy
    you touched a still place in me and made it stir
    my heart will forever smile when i think of you

    for the last time i will speak your name and say...

    my dear precious black man $$RICH$$,
    thank you for your love and letting me love you
    but now we must open our windows and allow
    the fresh air in to bathe us in the love of others
    as we continue on our journey in our hearts as friends
    much love to you my brother now go open your eyes
    and heart...see that beautiful sister...her love
    calling you over ---------->

    (smile)
     
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    One can loveth beyond what's seen
    as thy love is a whisper to linger
    yes and thy window been open too long
    for rain to continue it's flood
    for there is sunshine across da bays
    one always must fail to succeed
    as a renew envision abroad me
    yes you can if you will , go forth
    for thy new ventures as i smile
     
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