Black Poetry : can i holla at your words for a sec...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by diva08, Nov 27, 2002.

  1. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i dont' know you
    the only thing i've seen of you
    is a distorted and unfocused picture
    on your blackplanet page
    i've seen yoru screen name
    in the chat room
    and i don't agree with everything you have to say
    but i am in love with

    your flow

    action words actually
    do something
    to me
    it's so good i wish i could
    turn your words into rose petals
    sprinkle them on my bed
    and roll in them
    and smell them
    feel the softness of their massage
    seeping into me

    your flow is like my
    blood flow is like
    transporting your words to my heart
    that beats in rhythm to your
    ABAB rhyme scheme

    how did you
    filter my soul
    into the ink of your pen
    and simply
    write everything
    in me?

    you have never heard
    my voice on the telephone
    we haven't been
    pen pals
    e-pals
    pals... period

    shoot...
    i don't even know
    if i'd pay any attention to you
    if i saw you on the street

    but

    i want to marry
    your flow

    i want to be serenaded by the angels
    at a ceremonial unification
    of body mind and spirit
    and your cypher will
    fit perfectly
    on my
    "ring finger"
    and posess my hand to write
    and inspire
    and maybe affct someone like you
    affect me

    unexpected eargasms in public
    get me in trouble
    internalizing the wisdom
    you impart

    your flow
    makes me anxious
    i can't wait
    i'm feening
    for
    a
    computer
    where i can click on
    and get off
    on
    your flow
    u should see the condition
    of my pc at home....
    well.. maybe you shouldn't

    i have been repeatedly
    impregnated by
    your flow
    your wods have completely
    penetrated
    the depths of my soul
    over
    and
    over
    and
    over

    and i if i was in love with you
    the way i am in love with your flow
    i would be barefoot and pregnant
    all the time
    like for real
    (no contraception... cuz i just can't... feel anything... it ain't natural...)
    because of the abundance of
    love and
    respect and
    appreciation and...
    i wish i could say all that stuff
    to my significant other but
    your flow will do
    for now


    diva08 (c) 2002
     
  2. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this... very descriptive. reading this makes me "feel" everything that you're sayin'...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now make him feel ya vibe .......woooweeee !
     
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    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    diva!


    girl!! you betta hush!! :D

    see... i'm ova here testifyin' cause
    i know exact-ly how you feelin'.
    mmm mmm mmm... i Loved this!!

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wooooweeeee!!! This is a awesome piece!!!!! I've been here too....Sometimes the flow gets that powerful where it just sweeps you away into another realm....Bring me some more diva!!
     
  6. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm definitely feelin' this. sometimes words can do that to you.
     
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "YOU BETTER QUIT"

    OOH Lady
    you beter stop with that flow going. You know you speaking so realisum up in here.. Loving it.

    Queen:bowdown:
     
  8. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** - I wish this was about me !!


    Diva whomever you have paid this highest of high compliments
    to must be something else.

    You ? Barefoot and Pregnant ?
    Even metaphorically ??? -

    LOL -

    Naw, this piece was outstanding --

    i mean literally dripping with excellence.

    Lucky brutha he must be.
     
  9. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankya

    thank you wonderful people for the encouragement.

    hypno... yeah..... that's all i'm going to say about that. :D

    peace and blessings.

    d
     
  10. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Had to read it again maaan.

    Just had to.


    this is above and beyond diva.



    Am i the only person wondering how you sound
    reading this ??


    real yo, just real.
     
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