Black Poetry : Can I Have This Back

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  1. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I Have This Back

    Can I have this back
    My face and all that
    Every time I look up you in my face
    Can you give me my space
    I know you talk about me when I ain’t around
    It’s cool you don’t bring me down
    There most be something about me
    That keeps you staring keeps you hating
    Every time I talk
    You all up in my mouth
    What’s that all about
    Is there something wrong with your eyes
    Cuz they seem to be stuck on me
    It’s just something called jealously
    Can I have this back
    My face and all that
    Hey how you doing
    I’m just find
    Worry bout yours
    Don’t break your neck all concerned about mines
    Why you looking at me all the time
    Am I that fine
    Can you say envy
    That’s why you keep staring at me

    Written by: Rosalyn Ferrell
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    back up give me room
    up on me like i'm ya golden tumb
    all in mines never yours
    why the stare
    is it da look i ware
    what's up wit dat
    in my face flashing false smack
    i told u once i told u twice
    u all whack
    please step back...............

    I know where u coming from
    da haters in da air all round us
    i've been to the end
    i seen the eyes of stare
    if that could kill i'll be dead .....speak on !
     
  3. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    moving piece my sista...question...why must u continue staring at his hating eyes, his hating soul...is coldness leaving u wanting...let him give it back to you, then take it, fix it, and keep it locked safe inside...and wait for those loving eyes..

    lo'
     
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    jealousy
    cruel as the grave
    women want
    women crave
    men compete
    men hate
    just stay out
    your face.

    :star: :star:
     
  5. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    haters

    def. a good read, dont u hate haters,lol. keep doin ur thang
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    2 faced
    screw faced
    hater laced lizards
    wish i could banish them
    all away like a crew of wizards
    or betta yet
    bury the in pounds of snow
    from a blizzard
    i like to play a hate mongers
    head like a bongo
    wait up
    hows that slum village song go

    hey, what's up with this jealousy...
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. Zoya

    Zoya Member MEMBER

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    lol, hey I know what u mean they wanna take all that.
     
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    They dunno who they messin wit

    awww shucks I don't think they know what they messin wit. You need to step up so they can step down. I can't stand them haters!! My disgust for em grow exponentially !!

    LMAO, good one sista