Black Poetry : Can I get high?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Passionfruit005, Apr 5, 2006.

  1. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 17, 2005
    Messages:
    59
    Likes Received:
    4
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +4
    Can I get high?
    Can I be captivated by the thought of your internal fury and flung into eternity by the smoothness of your voice?
    Let your essence swirl around in my every breath until it becomes smoke trapped in my lungs, and exhale ....
    and exhale my last puff of you
    i want to take your herbal masculinity, break it down piece by piece
    and roll it in my ebony brown skin
    so you get fully acquainted with my creases and my folds
    my nooks and crannies, and you kno my papers thoroughly
    and maybe i can take your seeds, put them aside for later use
    if we, get better acquainted that is,
    if i get an addiction to you
    Even though I was told it was impossible, but still can I try?
    Can I get high?
    buy the seductiveness of you, and bag it
    sell it in the midnight's corner darkness unseen by the light
    Let your essence swirl around in my every breath until it becomes smoke trapped in my lungs, and exhale ....
    and exhale until my focus is no longer on the world
    but i am focusing on you and
    you filling me up completely
    leaving me in a constant ecstasy,
    craving your energy, having more then just a taste for your
    whole entire being, but more like i got the munchies for your soul
    because I've become addicted to your voice,
    addicted to soundwaves that exit
    your mouth before you have a chance to utter your first word,
    I've become enchanted by the breaths that you take, and hope that u continue to take them
    because I've fallen in love with the rhythm that your heart beat makes,
    the heart very rarely lies, but
    Can I get high?
    go to another level of conciseness with your affection,
    to another state of being,
    satisfied with just being inches away from your living soul
    inches away from reaching cloud nine,
    Just being inches away from reality, with you
    Letting your essence swirl around in my every breath until it becomes smoke trapped in my lungs, and exhale ....
    until i exhale you,
    ...and you let me inhale you
    until i exhale you
    ....and you let my inhale you
    until i exhale you, and you take away my breath
    Gasping for air, somewhere between the brown lines that define
    your body from mines
    in my state of mind, i define this as the ultimate love,
    my addiction to your soul, that lets me read between the lines
    Lets your essence swirl around in my every breath until it becomes smoke trapped in my lungs, and exhale ....
    and i was wondering, off your love,
    Can I get high?
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 30, 2005
    Messages:
    658
    Likes Received:
    7
    Ratings:
    +8
    tight drop, yeah you can get high...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    yes indeed you can get high !
    i love this piece
     
  4. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 13, 2006
    Messages:
    1,261
    Likes Received:
    206
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Teacher
    Location:
    Somewhere between paradise and diaster
    Ratings:
    +229
    I was really feeling the flo of this piece cuz. nice drop
     
  5. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 1, 2003
    Messages:
    1,332
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    Student by day, Poet by night
    Location:
    DETROIT
    Ratings:
    +7
    Flow on poet.
     
  6. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2005
    Messages:
    3,872
    Likes Received:
    134
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    working to own my plus size empire.....
    Location:
    I'm a Georgia Peach!!!!
    Ratings:
    +135
  7. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 18, 2006
    Messages:
    622
    Likes Received:
    7
    Ratings:
    +7
    heck naw, u betta get high cuz i kno i wud
    but u can definitly get higher den a mug ...lol
    i was feelin yo flo so deeply
    so flo on wit nonstop
    i luved it


    jus yo sistah showin sum luv


    blackluv and bp
     
Loading...