Black Poetry : Can I get drank pleeeeeze?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Dec 10, 2004.

  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well now....glad you were finally satisfied, I mean, I was beginning to worry about a sista....lol. You have a knack for placing your words, so that they are taken just the right way. And yes, I know what you mean, there are times when I am hankering for some words that will just wow me, or take me to a different place. Loved the way you conveyed this, it flowed so smoothly sis. :welldone:
     
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    hey Triniti whewwwwwwwwwww !! drink up this was tyte
     
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    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go head now sister Trinity!!! gone with yo bad self I like the way you flowin sis...Ms J
     
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    now you know I know you know....this was wheeeew
    sister friend bring it as always love the vibe...flow on POET!!!!!

    Peace
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    Looking to lick up lyrical drops of repetitious imagery
    And allow the vivid manifestations to fill me
    Thoroughly
    And overflowingly
    But daaaaaaayyyyyyum a sista is OH SO…*smiles* thirstyyyyyyyyy

    Let me see let me see
    I mean…
    …verbally…I seek to sustain a thirst deep within
    deep within
    deep..
    ………deep within…
    shhhh *whispers* its almost a sin
    the way I thirst and crave for some of that goooood shhhhhhhhhhh……………..
    -it
    -you-
    -get-
    -it?-
    I want that gooooooood shhhhhhh………………
    -it
    don’t give me that...
    generic-all-sounds-the-same
    spittin-da-same-game
    tryin-to-coochie-coo-some-coochie-too
    lackin-REAL-flava-watered-down
    till-they-all-have-da-same-sound
    all-lame-nursey-rhyme-schmactics
    cause I am an addict
    …Poetically…

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    Taste the hops cooking within my poetry. Take a :wine: gulp of my poetry. Quenching your thirst like a good lyric drop. Cold filtered, mountain high. :toast:
     
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    you over-satisfied my thirst with that one right tharr...you made the page dance and left it wet with sweet drops of poetry overfilling from your glasss......
     
  8. THA HOOKUPMAN

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    this is true poetry ....im standing up and lightin a match for this one boo boo....you wrote your :zipit: off.....love it...i think i need a drank tooo....lol..hookup ..write on sista write on.... :thinking: :thinking:
     
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    ah haaaaa


    so sweet so sweet....

    thats that shhhhhh im talkin about....

    nice flow ma


    hollah at me :sand:
     
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    :welldone:

    :hearthis:

    See what hapens when a thusrt has cried to be quenched? It leaves a sister lyrically drenched in fee flowing nonstop keep it going if it was a song she would never stop blowing 4 her thirst wove a pattern that keeps on flowing.
    Sister u are my enigizer bunny....
    ......u keep going
    ................................N going
    ..............................................N Going

    I bow to your thirst but 1st I offer u a big @zz cup of poetic that's what's up!
    4 I am now drinking within this stanza or is it a free flowing banaza from wich I now suck?
    I'm holding back somthing inside............
    F this man from what I hear and see from poetry U can't hide!

    How many time can a poet touch u in one flow and u not know how to keep away from it so u just spit some back and say I know poet, I know poet, I know!

    This was a spoken word joint 4 sure my sister and thanks 4 it. :hearts2:
     
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