Black Poetry : Can I Flow Wit Chu?

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  1. anotha_LEVEL

    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    Can I flow wit chu?
    Girl I just wanna flow wit chu
    Get 2 know...lay low.... and take it slow wit chu
    Take u 2 a place u neva been b 4 mentally
    Attentively setting your mind at ease wit real love essientially
    A n!99a just want u to rise wit him
    A rare breed she a specialty and trust I pick selectively
    Forget ya ex cause I'll take u 2 extacy
    Letting my lips caress you below sea level where X marks the spot inevidibly
    [email protected]........ I just wanna flow wit chu
    Down the river of desire where my final destination is in your heart starting a fire
    And if I can't land there I wanna be somewhere close 2 it
    I'll soothe your pain so in the future u won't have to go thru it
    A n!99a just wanna flow wit chu
    Chill and lay low wit chu
    Take it slow n maybe even smoke dro wit chu
    Cause when I look into your eyes........ honestly I don't see no h0e in you
    Girl u on another level
    I just wanna equalize your inner melody....... I'll provide the bass and u can turn up the treble
    We need 2 flow ova that track........
    Create a new verse and press record
    Then take some time 2 just explore the possibilities........
    And I kno u feeling me........
    I just wanna make love for 80mins pulling out all 10 of ya tracks while letting our love burn at a slow speed...........
    [email protected]........
    And after that session..........I just wanna lay low wit chu
    But as of now... Girl I wanna take it slow...get 2 know n just let it FLOW wit chu.



    anotha_LEVEL
     
  2. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooh, baby.
    Mmm.
    This is...
    Enough said.
     
  3. anotha_LEVEL

    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks sistah lol


    I guess that means u like it then :lol


    Hey... I'm from Detroit as well.


    :)
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anotha_LEVEL ... this is off the charts!:darts:

    You can lease this one out to brothers who don't know what to say.
    I need it a few times because some sisters. Take ( your ) our ( my ) breath away!
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is my first read of your flow. I like this very much. Just a moment.. First Welcome to Destee.. I'm writing your login name on my keep up list. I found my self singing it. This is a great song. Put it out there!
     
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    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks my brotha

    I REALLY appreciate it


    u really sound real wit tha love and I respect that


    I hope to read some of ur stuff soon as well man.
     
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    ANOTHA LEVEL

    let me just say that flow with you has me on anotha level
    when it comes to the flow i'm no angel but a devil
    neva had i ever had a man want to play all my tracks
    we can make love to the sounds of Teddy Pendergrass or Roberta Flack
    this level that your on i so want to explore
    the way your rhymes is hitting me has me wanting for more
    touch me tease me have it anyway you like
    i promise i'll be a good girl for you i won't bite
    downtown is where you wanna be
    it won't be hard for me
    to give you some of this flavor
    that you so much want to savor
    can i flow with u on the couch, in the park, or in the car
    what you say you'll be bringing we wont get far
    well fall down whereever our body may land
    because were on anotha level truly my man
    as i look into your eyez i ask can i flow with cha
    on anotha level

    man i just like to say you got me hot in here with this piece i want to take my clothes off. just kidding much love for this
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see a collaboration coming on. Go Nevar!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to hodee

    im ready to flow if he will cause aint neva scared
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was so nice,
    I had to read it twice.
     
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