Black Poetry : Can He???

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can he,
    Make you moan low
    while doing you real slow
    and make it seem as though
    his hands are in a hundred places at one time?

    Can he,
    captivate your mind
    with deep words and conversation
    have you heatedly debating
    all the things that don't really matter?

    Can he,
    touch you like you feel
    make the fantasy seem real
    and leave you wishing you had more time to waste?

    Can he,
    look you in your face
    make you forget all time and space
    all because he is just so **** fine?

    Can he,
    hit it from behind
    make you suck your thumb and whine
    and never make you feel like he's in a rush?

    Can he,
    be that gentle man
    make you glad that he's your man
    and never make you regret the day you met?

    Can he
    make you sweat when there's no heat
    while he comforts you in the flames
    craving his body like hunger pains
    got your kitty by the reigns
    now your world is not the same
    and you don't give a pluck that it's changed....





    Can He?

    Caramelpython
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmmm
    wow
    the question
    description
    indeed touch me there
    wow
    very nice
    hmmm
    can she :idea:
    deeply
    Peace
     
  3. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL I know that whoever "she" is "He" will never be able to be "Me" So I will never believe "He" can...LOL
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice well displayed
    guess u da man !
     
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    indeed very nice....
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can he.....................???

    ****, he can do it better
    Make me even wetter
    btw, I never moaned low.....
    I moaned loud
    But you were too busy doing work
    it didn't matter if i was naked in a crowd

    He is intriguing to me
    his mentality and his conversations
    Makes me wonder why I was with you
    You were a difficult situation

    his touch is like liquid
    his kisses are like air
    He wipes away my fears
    and licks my tears

    He twists me into sexual positions
    I didn't even think I could preform
    I can touch my toes..behind my head
    Yet, he loves me until dawn


    he can do all the things that you were scared to do
    And thats why we are currently through...

    can he....

    oh yes...
    he can
     
  7. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    wow...nice flow...both of you.
     
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    tyte disco flow....
    keep em come'n brah....
    peace
    khasm
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol I can just see sistas wit a man askin him...if he can lol
    :lol:
     
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    He The Man!