Black Poetry : camouflage

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  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    camouflaging my affections with
    your entourage of mystic expressions
    should I dwell in your lush forest of dreams
    or move on to new and different things?

    colors surround every paragraph with questions
    misty blues or turquoise hues to shade my essence
    with the reflection of calm...but is it as real as it seems
    or should these ocean greens appear illusionary beings?

    never knew a rainbow would be quite like you
    could be quite so new
    each time a different hue
    never knew....
    but now you've shown me like most will not do
    that your camouflage is the most intriguing part of you...

    some call it a mask, but I look beyond the surface
    into your past, and reflect on higher purpose
    cuz reds and purples may fascinate these senses
    but the inside is colorless and has no pretenses...

    and though a shame some would think you worthless
    your spectrum allowed me through love to birth this
    with each illuminating shade surrounding me like fences
    each rainbow piece of my own soul tingles, even tenses...

    never knew camouflage would be quite so deep
    could be quite so sleek
    to slither into me, creep
    never knew...
    but now you've shown me secrets most won't keep
    your rainbow dreams follow me from waking until my sleep...

    camouflage me with your rainbow
    color me with all your soul
    :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

    (just another 1 right off that top of tha tip...no lie...color me yo!)
    S.Z.Divine 2001
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2Fish,

    I see ya queen!!!! Ya can't camouflage talent!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2FISH....

    well... just do da **** thang den!!...

    off da top & tyght... yes indeed! :):):):

    LuvU4Life...
    SunShyne~
     
  4. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this piece is real smoothe here..Luv'd it!
    Jyntl
     
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    touching fish...

    definitely feeling this.

    keep it flowing.
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And so I swim...now...

    ...in your school - 2fish!!
    I love this piece here sista-frynd!
    Ya' keepz it ty---ght!
     
  7. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah...

    this one really speaks to me...plus I felt pretty clever at the rhyme scheme...thanks for the read mos def!!!! And 4 that GOOD LUVIN...you all know that's why I'm addicted to this spot! REAL LOVE!
     
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    Now I dig this!!!!
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two's

    I love the camouflage that is you!!!!
     
  10. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks dear sistahs

    I always get a warm fuzzy feelin when I read these responses...MUCH LOVE! :)
     
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