Black Poetry : Calling....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My struggles have taken hold
    Formation of a rock…bold and I can’t seem to move it

    Out the way…

    Its molding my mind twisting my thoughts
    For my spirit is roaming fast
    Looking for answers today
    Just want to know why
    Must I be in this pain
    Soul is crying and the light is dim
    And I don’t know what to do

    Lord, I am

    Lost
    in the forest of the world

    My bones feel like they are shattered

    Mind running in circles
    Lost on a road
    My soul is aching for your touch
    Calling your name

    For

    I….

    can’t find my way

    My tears pouring into ink
    As my pain becomes free
    Letting the creation take hold
    No one knows like you
    How my struggles have trapped me
    Can’t breath, fire in my being
    Have my lungs covered with smoke

    Lost….

    And calling your name
    Lord can you hear me?

    Today.....

    The darkness takes me in
    And the bitterness comes out
    My warmth becoming cold

    Lord, I been invaded

    My peace been taken
    My struggle has won
    But I am still fighting

    Today I am going

    Going through the storm of the way



    In times of trouble, you will protect me.
    you will hide me in your tent and keep me safe
    on top of a mighty rock....Psalm



    (C) 2005
    Poetry Praise
    Chapter 3
     
  2. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful poetic psalm!!!




    Chapter 3? Is this a book? I hope it is cuz I want to buy it...do you take PayPal???

    Talk to a sistah...waiting.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was extremely beautiful a breath taking piece
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Mz Blk Angel...

    clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap (standing ovation)

    :D

    :toast:

    :kiss:

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  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanking you Joyce, Rich, Money for the love on this scribe...

    much love and blessings...Angel

    Ps...Maybe one day a book dont worry sister Joyce I let you be the first thank you again for all the love you share....Angel
     
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    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you arranged your words so beautifully in this poem...i love the expression...awsome job!
     
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    all i gotta say is "talk about it girl"---life in a nutshell, really enjoyed and could relate.
     
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    peace,

    Indeed in times of trouble u are protected from above. Just remember as u travel thru the storm (which is only an illusion to try & steer u away from the right path) or are being surrounded by negative forces, close your eyes & hold out your arms & say "peace be still" & it shall be for you are God's child!!

    this was very inspiring Mzblkangel...............

    peace
     
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    re:Calling

    No words can express my love for this poem. Absolutely beautiful. :dance1:
     
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    Angel, this peace is very touching.
     
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