Black Poetry : Calling You

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The first time that I sense you
    A vibe in the air
    A crowded bus stop
    In the heat of the summer
    I turned and you was there

    I wonder why
    I had this feeling
    That…. I have known you

    That … you were not a stranger

    The bus arrive …you were gone
    Heart felt tore why… why was I feeling this way
    Would I ever …see you again?

    I had a dream
    I was walking on the sandy shore of Africa
    Feeling the warm embrace of my warrior

    I smiled … as I looked into the eyes
    Of the man I called my brother
    Feeling shy
    As we walked… silently… peacefully

    Then a WRATH fiery sprung
    An attack of demon men without skin
    Broke us apart … I screamed your name
    Frighten and scared.
    Would I ever …see you again?

    A year past … I often thought of you
    A stranger on a crowded bus stop
    Have taken a piece of my heart
    Then I felted that vibe

    As I turned you was walking
    Towards me
    Heart beating wild
    The drums of the ancestors calling

    Some old friends was with you
    Through them we were introduce
    You said you did not want to approach me
    Disrespectfully
    You wanted to be properly
    Introduce to me
    I … do… know… you

    My warrior
    That was taken from me
    On the shores of Africa

    Our love
    Have travel hundreds of years
    To here

    We have a spiritual connection
    To finish the love that was started
    On the shore of Africa
    My love …we are together once again
    Soul mate connecting
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    i love this soulmate
    of the worrior connecting
    flow on .......
     
  3. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (snaps)... feelin this...
    I really liked this...
    keep on flowin....
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    wow...i love this
    a picture oh man...
    nice girl
     
  5. gempis

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    Whooooooooooaaaaaaaaaa!!! This is so deep - feelin this like you don't know. Beautiful vibes, sister.
     
  6. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You hit home with this one. A masterpiece. I literally felt this deep in my heart as I read this. A beautiful picture was painted as I read. The vibes are deep, spiritual and ancestral.
     
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    I was completely capsized in the mystical wave of this vibe
    This was very true to life, as I have met my soul mate
    and it was soooo very much like this...not in story
    but in the feeling...the levels of timelessness...
    the seemingly spiritual connection...

    Encore Bluewater:spinstar:....Encore:spinstar:
     
  8. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi my bruther RICH yes indeed the journey of the souls connecting..:love: thank you for the love

    Hi SUNkissed so happy you were feeling this much love to you:heart:thank you

    Hi mzblkangel :) i am so glad you felted the vision thank you my sistah

    Hi gempis you are so wonderful and kind..thank you so much:heart:

    Hi Pharaoh Jah ..the vibes can be strong when the ancestors speak..thank you so much for sharing your love.:heart:

    Hi angelicsage my sistah:) the unseen spiritual connection..the vibe in the air..ahhhh yes...it is indeed a mystery how the soul can soar to pick up from where it left off..thank you sistah

    Thank you:thanks: my family :grouphug:
    Peace and much love :heart:
    Peace
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww......that was so beautiful and unique. I felt you on this one. There were lots of vibez flowin' through this one. I loved it. Hey.....is this a true story? It sounds so real. Anyway, I thought it was magnificent.
     
  10. Pharaoh Jahil

    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had to come back and read this a few more times. This kinda reminds me of Erykah Badu's "Next Life Time".
     
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