Black Poetry : Calling All Ladies Of Destee...are We Going To Take This Mess?

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The brothers are saying they are whippin our butts.
    Now I am not ready to say I had enuff.
    So I hope you will come with your very best stuff.
    No half stepping no sleeping we put our rep on the line.
    And how we get to TOP DOLLS...will be how we define...
    What is love and how we do the things that we do.
    So calling all ladies , 'WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO'?

    BJS(c)2003
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hell Nawl

    we ain't takin this bull______t...... The ladies of Destee can hold their own at any given time..... Which we still have......




    ***finna come with my spit for real for real***




    One
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we ain't have it !
    bruthas let's put dem to HUSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's for us to say! You all are the ones cheating

    The real deal is this...You can't get to making love without a kiss. Sex is not making love...And discussing or rhyming about screwing is not Romantic Poetry....if you are going to have a genuine challenge it should be done in an orderly fashion...
    it should be fair and impartial, it should have integrity...or else we are just writing to be writing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Blessings On Ya House!

    Rich, I am so disappointed in you for this little comment...but freedom of speech rules!
     
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    and why is kemetstry counting? we can't get a man and a woman? u know if a woman was counting they would be saying the same thing if we were ahead. and is this about quality or quantity? cuz i ain't putting every love poem i've ever written on the page and ain't nobody putting up no monetary award. or send me some food or something.

    d08
     
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    excuse me......but uhhh.....its not about the counting...its about how many of yall respond to the call...I've been watching how yall talking about whatcha gone do, but ain't read no posts except from just a few....Hey Zorbie!!! where's your post? Diva, baby how many you got out there is response to the challenge? Lucious, you been holding it down with the most posts, but its suppose to be all the ladies or at least more than 2 or 3.....oh and I do remember reading some of the ladies who did post and saw some straight up eroticism in there...so let's not make this one-sided now.....just post your work......now at first the ladies was leading but then they just stop posting....what happened????don't hate us cause we made the call to the brethren............call the sistas!!!!!!
     
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    we just havin fun wit da love thing and the men just starting flowin and da ladies stop ........
    well stop talking and write, flow, bring da love vibe .....
     
  8. msluciousb

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    There is a limit to what is classy and what is just trashy!

    Your behavior is less than admirable at this time...as for writing, I think I am more than holding up my end of this little challenge, but if I knew it was goig to be rigged I would have done my own thing and not even committed, unlike some folks "LADIES" , who claimed they were going to participate and didn't show up for the challenge. But, lets stop with the ridiculous premature-ejaculatory celebration! It's like an impotent man screaming who's your daddy and he's faking the orgasm in the begin!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    And this is my page and my contribution and ya know I will talk when I get ready to. Now don't make me have to spank you!

    Blessings On ya House!
     
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    Tell it like it is girl. Mslucious, i don't blame ya at all, we need to learn how to show some love to some peeps sometimes. 4 real, i commemorate ya because u worked hard and u put in a lot of effort in your writing. I'm proud of ya sista. Raise da roof!!

    AM
     
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    Msluscious....

    I have to admit that I am one of those who's writing so far has bordered on hot..erotic..whatever..that's the way I write....and I plan on trying to write some sweet love poetry as well...to be fair to the men, I think they have been turning out some fantastic poetry, and some of it is hot, some of it is just sweet and beautiful...but this challenge is all in good fun...and if they rub it in a bit that they are winning, well we can take that with a smile , we still have a few days to go....and I, for one have been enjoying coming on here every day reading the work from all of us..

    K
     
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