Black Poetry : Callin' Her Name

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me tell you about my woman
    in infinitesimal syllables
    one
    by
    one
    just to hear the sound
    that this
    love jones vibe
    describes

    when
    I call her name

    Lovin’ the chemistry of her anatomy
    and mine conjoined in shivers that neither
    one of us can deny
    or even dare to try

    If I’m alone late at night thinking
    naughty but nice thoughts of her
    it makes my
    trembles straight resemble
    her touching me;
    ****...my woman caresses
    my sexy sexualities
    to the tune of her own mind

    In the morning I rise to find her pretty spirit next to me
    givin’ nice slow grinds; her womanhood riding
    up and down
    &
    down and up
    my very hard love line

    and it’s because
    I call her name
    at just the right time

    Tongue kissin’ till hearts beat rhythmically
    Like raging rivers
    she delivers
    a love so sweet
    upon my hungry "her" telepathy

    Moving with grooves so tender and
    gently stroking one another’s mental
    All I know is this woman’s who I want
    to be devoted to
    and
    have all the world see

    so
    I call her name
    to have her close

    where I want her to be

    right
    here

    deep inside me...

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ.....break it down bruh!
    and hold her ever so close
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: real hot! -7:spinstar:
     
  4. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH MY GOODNESS.

    wow hun...this is just...lovely...
     
  5. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bighead.


    say my name!!
    say... my... ****... name!! :lol:

    i'm diggin' it... ummhmm... sho is!!

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  6. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Q- you raizin' hell on this one! nice flow... ... KILLER!!!
     
  7. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****, this kinda turned me on! I was grooving!
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go head on with yo bad self

    ohhhh weeee !!!!!!! GQ you be holding it down and what layne said :D



    One
     
  9. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smooth flow poet
     
  10. Sunshyne

    Sunshyne Active Member MEMBER

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    I really enjoyed this piece. I know whom ever you wrote it about must be very special.

    And as my friend Shaz says is a smooth flow.

    Keep doing what you do MR. GQ
     
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