Black Poetry : call me...*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    call me--

    three thirty fifty six--
    call me elemental--
    quintessential
    and essential--
    like--
    blood is to ventricles--
    and atriums--
    maybe umm...

    i am the part of the universe no one could comprehend--
    call me E=MC sean
    interrelating to all that is
    correlating
    directly--
    and inversely--
    to all and nothing--

    i rock with words--
    call me
    'boulderman'--
    or Shakespeare's son--
    lost in philosophies--
    and predetermined notions--
    of
    society and it's long shortcomings--
    call me--
    happily disappointed--
    blind eye
    must be the third--
    smashing my focus--
    with
    the things that surround me--

    with reality
    pressed against
    life
    time
    color
    sky
    wind
    air

    still breathing
    still here
    call
    me

    a survivor.


    'Shakespearessonlostinthought'

    espee
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo Sean,

    This is a very cleverly written piece!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE YET POWERFUL FLOW!

    Thank you for making us dig deeper.
    And feel more intensely the words
    of our fellow poets whose style
    remain their own.
    Do yo thang!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyght scribe and well felt here .....flow on as i read u
     
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    manifested Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the replies. they are greatly appreciated.
     
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    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nicely done, poet. I like!!!
    Eternal
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the replies!

    they are much appreciated
     
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