Black Poetry : Call Me Radiant

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I gaze through fused sands watching spring change it's
    clothes donning itself in summer hues

    it looks so beautiful warm colors of
    orange persimmon and cinnamon

    I pray that you see what I see
    hear what I hear feel what I feel

    the morning eye dances I take it's hand
    and we slide through your blinds and I am
    absorbed by your skin

    do you like what you feel? call me radiant
    call me....
    .....call me...please

    call me when you need to be placed on
    the free side of freedom so we can
    syncopate the echos of our four chambers

    splash stars on the wall and rearrange them
    until we are in a celestial embrace and connect at
    our Lagrange Point* 'til mass transfer takes place
    and all of you paints me peace.

    (c)2001 blakverb

    *Lagrange Point: named after the french mathematician Joseph Louis Lagrange, where the star's gravitational forces are exactly the same (between the stars). If one star expands so much that it's outer layers pass the Lagrange Point,, the other star will begin to strip away the layers and accumulate them on it's surface. This process is called "mass transfer"
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Radiant you are!

    and terribly gifted...intelligent...creative...I could go on and on and on!!

    Will u b my mentor?:)
     
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    Ok, Radiant!

    Blackverb! I LUV YOU MAN! LOL VERY PRECIOUS. YOU'RE A BEAUTIFUL BROTHA AND TALENTED AND GIFTED ALSO. I ALWAYS LOVE READING YOU'RE POETRY. YOU ARE SO RADIANT, THANKS
    Desert Storm
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you know PEACE???....

    You say you do....
    and I do know that YOU are radiant
    and this is a tyght piece of peace!!

    :heart:n' erythang ya' do....!
    Your #1 fan!! :lol:
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB.....

    from one bryght child to anotha... :)

    this piece reflects your beautiful blakman radiance...
    irreversibly... & i am shynin' all ova it... i love it!

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dizzzzzammmm! verb u took it up a notch
    flow in brutha Blk.
     
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    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hear Hear, BlakVerb does it again.!
     
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    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was a tru peace i wan't my words to flo so will.
    ur deep, deeper than I can be but I'm trin trin and trin

    PEACE DAYA

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    WE ARE AS STRONG AS WE WON'T TO BE
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FAmily thank you for the love.
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH YEAH, LAGRANGE..... I DO BELIEVE U HAVE NOT YET DISPLAYED TO US POTENTIAL IN ITS FULL RANGE ... ITS ALLLLL GOOD MY BROTHA
     
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