Black Poetry : CALL 911 !!!!

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  1. $ms>GET IT

    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    Somebody call 911 Iv'e just been shot,No the weapon was'nt a gun,And da man dat shot me has yet to run.

    (police)WHAT IS HE DOING?

    He's standing over me looking me dead in my eyes.
    He cares not that Im hurt nor that im cryin.

    (police)WHAT IS YOUR RELATIONSHIP WITH HIM?

    He use to be the love of my life,Intill I decided to give my body to christ.Then he change,

    (police)WHAT DOES HE LOOK LIKE?

    He's dark and tall,He's wearin a black Rocka wear T-shirt that I brought from da mall.

    (police)WHERE ARE YOU IN DA HOUSE?

    The hell with all da questions are you comin to save my life.Im layin on my floor In my blood and this bulls--- aint right.

    (police) O.K. LADY WHERE DO YOU LIVE?

    You took to long, plus Im already dead.
    Maybe da next victim that call can make It to a hospital bed.

    (THEY SAY JUST CALL 911)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up ! this was on point
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When a love turns cold, it can feel like we've been hit by a deadly weapon. Creative flow.
     
  4. Earftones

    Earftones Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happens all too often. Nice piece
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very creative enjoyed the flow...
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you poet, as I have gone through a few deaths as well
     
  7. $ms>GET IT

    $ms>GET IT Active Member MEMBER

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    Its just a shame dat no matter what your love one do to you,you still love um.(well i know i do) But we live and we learn.Thanks 4 da love
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel u.
    been shot,stabbed, wounded
    but, don't worry,
    some1 comes to play doctor.
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea time to move on, things happen for a reason

    again it's their loss not yours

    i really liked this here


    DSS
     
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