Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Sep 10, 2004.
walks by I can see
the wind tickling her polished toes
just to rub against her thighs
and men get caught
as if they bought
a piece of her time
like money falling from the sky
she smiles and I imagine
some cool word to say
but I dare believe I have the heart to
watch the rivers of her lips part
I’d rather observe and know
a work of art had moved pass
not fast....but slow
cause when angelicsage
I can not equate the hand of
God that made
her copper skin
her star lit eyes
her breast like big tear drops
and milky thighs
Like rain I thirst
to touch her grounds
and be found in the treasures
of her secret place
Dancing like the wind in the leaves
I want to climb her trees of intimacy
Sunshine umm.. angelicsage
owns everything in these urban street
and I’m seeing her being all
and all of her being
As I watch her move and listen
the only thing she’s missing is a crown.
......great flow girl....your a queen and u know this....hookup
this was so beautifully done and clearly i see da love instill
within thee openly freely i see da C.L.R wow !!!!
u go gurl !
I wonder when it will return to me... Beautiful, girl! You actually make me MISS love.
oh yes indeed it do have away
when it returns...flow it sis
i understand ya .....
Love, such a beautiful experience, in all its forms. When a past love goes sour, and we dare to let a new possibility in, that in and of itself deserves applause. What got my attention the most in this lovely piece, was how freely and confidently the words flowed. ^5 sis.
Thanks so much Rich...Much, much love to you!
Sister...love will find you...
It has found me...and I'm sooooo Happy
Much thanks and Much love...
Freely and confidently is right...
There is a certain assurance that is there when true love arrives...
You know it without a shadow of a doubt, thus the confidence
to write and speak...free without hesitation and question
Love is gamble...but we must always remain open to it and it will come...
So grateful for your insightfulness...
Much love to you!
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