Black Poetry : C.L.R ~ The Remedy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Sep 10, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    When angelicsage
    walks by I can see
    the wind tickling her polished toes
    just to rub against her thighs
    and men get caught
    as if they bought
    a piece of her time

    like money falling from the sky
    she smiles and I imagine
    some cool word to say
    but I dare believe I have the heart to
    watch the rivers of her lips part
    I’d rather observe and know
    a masterpiece
    a work of art had moved pass
    not fast....but slow

    cause when angelicsage
    walks by
    I can not equate the hand of
    God that made
    her copper skin
    her star lit eyes
    her breast like big tear drops
    and milky thighs
    Like rain I thirst
    to touch her grounds
    and be found in the treasures
    of her secret place
    Dancing like the wind in the leaves
    I want to climb her trees of intimacy
    Sunshine umm.. angelicsage

    owns everything in these urban street
    and I’m seeing her being all
    and all of her being
    As I watch her move and listen
    the only thing she’s missing is a crown.

    ......great flow girl....your a queen and u know this....hookup
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so beautifully done and clearly i see da love instill
    within thee openly freely i see da C.L.R wow !!!!
    u go gurl !
     
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    I wonder when it will return to me... Beautiful, girl! You actually make me MISS love.
     
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    oh yes indeed it do have away
    when it returns...flow it sis
    i understand ya .....
     
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    Love, such a beautiful experience, in all its forms. When a past love goes sour, and we dare to let a new possibility in, that in and of itself deserves applause. What got my attention the most in this lovely piece, was how freely and confidently the words flowed. ^5 sis.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much Rich...Much, much love to you!

    Family again, :grouphug:
    Sage
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister...love will find you...

    It has found me...and I'm sooooo Happy :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:


    :thanks:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed sister...
    Much thanks and Much love...
    Sage :)
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Freely and confidently is right...

    There is a certain assurance that is there when true love arrives...

    You know it without a shadow of a doubt, thus the confidence

    to write and speak...free without hesitation and question

    Love is gamble...but we must always remain open to it and it will come...



    So grateful for your insightfulness...
    Much love to you!
    Sage :wink:
     
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