Quiet Poetry Lounge : BYE...............

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by beautifulblkw, May 6, 2008.

  1. beautifulblkw

    beautifulblkw Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All along I new I had to
    didn't want to
    felt so sad to
    treated me like a Queen
    why did I be so mean
    ask for forgiveness
    many times before
    I think I should just walk out the door
    can't understand why it was so hard
    pray for you
    laid with you
    how come I couldn't be true to you
    didn't want to admit being so bitter
    not understanding others gave me the jitters
    don't want to hurt you anymore
    I think I should just walk out the door
    felt like you didn't deserve me
    wanted you to do extra to earn me
    all of my garbage you would hold on to
    don't ask me to stay
    I don't wanted to be this way
    a King deserves better way
    sorry for the pain
    hope I didn't leave a stain
    I'm not gonna hurt you any more
    now I'm walking out the door


    :bye:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can't understand how this could be
    when i whisper words of love to thee
    i don't wanna really go
    but my twisted action beginning to sho
    there no place for me but the door
    I know u should have the best
    and i put you through the test
    now my soul wanna confess
    after we played and laid and rest
    see i knew this day would come
    after the rain then the sun
    can't help but think of you
    yet i ran around not being true
    now i'm really through
    nothing left more to do
    but walk out the door
    i'm sorry for what i done
    all the stress and pain without fun
    i hope i didn't hurt you too bad
    when you was the best i ever had
    let me go , don't look back
    finding your happiness is where it at
    bye.

     
  3. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!!! Whew!!! (wiping the sweat off my brow)...

    Sis Beautiful....such a moving flow (smh)..I'm a little speechless for words.

    Great flowback Bro. Rich

    ya gonna make me...write something...here it comes....
     
  4. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wanna go but I don't know how
    One foot out the door but I made this vow
    "I love you" he says...if...you would just do more
    I'm looking around thinking he must be keeping score

    I wanna go but I don't know how

    Should I continue to toil like an indentured slave
    Can't eat, can't sleep, dropping pounds like I'm headed for the grave
    Death in my thoughts became common practice
    Loving you is as a dry as a desert cactus

    I wanna go but I don't know how

    I gave all my love until I was all loved out
    You took all I had and then some no doubt
    No one should ever be forced to give til there's nothing left
    Stolen right from under my nose like petty theft

    I wanna go but I don't know how

    No one would believe me
    They love him too much to ever see
    What would people say
    But whats the alternative for death is the ultimate price to pay

    I gotta go now...time to say goodbye

    The door is open and I can see the light
    The closer I get the stronger it shines bright
    YES!!! It's calling me and the pain I can no longer feel
    I see love on the other side and it seems so real

    I gotta go now...time to say goodbye!
    Goodbye to everything I thought I knew
    Goodbye to days and nights of feeling blue
    Goodbye to neglect, pain and emotional dispair
    Hello to the answers to my prayers

    I gotta go now...time to say goodbye!
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Even harder to admit the wrong that we've done ourselves, and your expression of that, was very touching. Good flow backs from Rich and LovesDestiny. Intense write here.