Black Poetry : bye

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Sep 30, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we use to talk
    now it’s a word match
    everytime.
    A phone call is harm a
    Thought is hurt…
    Just a gesture but cant win…
    I cant be your friend I cant be
    What you think I should be…
    no business..nothin
    you over looked
    you use to love me...
    now you dont...
    see i never changed
    you did...
    Its time for me to walk…
    So here’s when I say good
    bye and good luck…
    no kisses no hugs…
    just let me walk….
     
  2. Andreattah

    Andreattah Active Member MEMBER

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    I can see your soul and that really came from the heart.
    You are so right....cutting losses sometimes is the only way to back to "you".

    tight flow....keep on writin'
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Andreattah...thanks for the read
     
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    Poet of the week.

    Keep on posting. This is a great post.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HODEE..thank you..you are so kind
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it can be so hard to just walk sometimes...but when it's over it's over...i can really relate to this. much love
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love...
    glad u like it..thanks girl for the read
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when it's time
    it's time
    like the way you flowed with this
     
  9. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW, this is so powerful it gave me goosebumps. You havin a rough time out in Ohio girl. You need me to take care of sumthin for you LOL. Smile girl, an honest heart like yours will overcome the most dishonest men.
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Randee...lol...thank you for ur kind words...but i be ok
    glad you like