Black Poetry : Bye Baby

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  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (bluewater classic)

    Sitting here all alone
    Star-ring at the telephone
    Feeling so blue

    Candlelight dinner made for 2
    Another evening ruin for you and me
    I had enough

    Called a cab to pick me up
    Left the phone un hung
    On the couch
    Candles blown out
    Wiping my tears away
    Putting the food away
    My heart…………..aching

    Oh. Oh. Oh. Baby
    Yes baby
    I’m telling you
    That I am threw
    With you.

    The cab driver blowing his horn
    I grab my purse I am going
    Out on the town

    I plan to dance until dawn
    I will indeed have fun
    I am moving on

    I feel a deep release
    Come over of me
    I laugh.
    Embracing life joyfully
    This is the first time
    I have had fun
    In months
    I have move on.

    There is someone out there for me
    I just need to be more patience
    And enjoy my life. As I go on

    Oh. Oh. Oh. Baby
    Bye baby
    I had enough
    I have moved on.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    loving this flow...peace
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my my my !!
    his lost o ' y
    left alone
    dinner for 2
    candlelight
    da mood was right
    now it's dem and gone
    her heart now roam

    dis was awesome letting the un wise know of such
    beauty once had last time alone

    hurry cab i just made it in town !
    to change the tearful frowns
    to smiles as we paint the town

    i love this piece
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you've just got to move on, and you did it with such style.
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angle thank you sister i am glad you like this drop ..thank you for the :heart:

    watziname thank you for the love:heart: if ya gonna do it..do it in style:) thank you sister
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    his lost indeed

    changing the tearful flown upside
    as my heart roam
    a warrior awakes
    and see the treasure in me
    and release the bond
    pleasure from within
    thank you brother rich for the love:heart:
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    at some point you know when
    and i loved the drop indeed
    mine of a strong sister at hand...
    flow on...
     
  8. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you sister sure you feel bad and then sad..but can't let it weight you down:heart:
    Peace
     
  9. $$RICH$$

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    indeed sistah blue
    it was so real i know this so well
     
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    May I

    My heart screams as I wipe my tears,
    I am strong I move on to a nubian king.
    The sound of darkness has rattle my heart.
    The strength of a queen has moved on.
    I walk with honor within the time of darkness
    I woman have the power within the palms of my hands.
    Love not lost which was never there.
     
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