Black Poetry : BY THE HANDS OF HIM

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BY THE HANDS OF HIM

    After I regained consciousness
    My mind was still asleep
    Body veinless, wounds painless to my imagination
    Bruised brains unable to sustain the glory that he gains from my pain

    You see I am the reflection of his childhood rejections
    His violence expresses his definition of loving me
    Rage speaks through his fingertips
    Each blow represents a glimpse of his past
    History stays repetitious in his memory
    Contained by stains of the heart

    His love neglects to show compassion
    Black and blue is his fashion and I’m the supermodel for his trademark
    A stage for genocide, emotional suicide
    His hands are psychologically tied to his hurt inside

    But riptides stand at attention waiting for you to mention
    The symbolic existence that a woman creates
    For I am the love of your life
    The leaf for your tree
    The lens for your eyes, your sister for life
    The backbone of production the reason for your function
    So please don’t make me beg for my life

    I am the rib God created from your very own
    So you’ll never ever have to walk alone
     
  2. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    loving this...cursed....reality poems for real people.

    another gem.
     
  3. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the love abstract219:luvu: much appreciated poet:luvu:
     
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    i am loving this.
    There are many great poets on Destee.com
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thank you Ibrahim:kiss1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the hands of him wow !
    u really have shine like a true treasure i love it !!!!!!
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thank you Rich:kiss1: :kiss1:
     
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    this was a wonderful write flow on poet of the week love ya!!!!!1:kiss1:
     
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    :kiss1: Thank you Nevar girl:kiss1:
     
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    Beautiful Sister
    You are a true poet indeed
     
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