Black Poetry : By the hands of her lover

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  1. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    By the hands of her lover she would never tell
    I try to help her but she told me she fell

    By the hands of her lover she was abuse
    when questions come about she made an excuse
    that was the first but never the last

    By the hands of her lover wrapped around her neck
    there's never a witness while they were on the deck

    By the hands of her lover her life would end
    she was very sweet and also my best friend
     
  2. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bawling: :bawling:

    that was beautiful.. i lost a cousin that way, if it's personal i'm sorry. but if it's not.. i'm still sorry.

    ::even the plainest of hearts can dance::
     
  3. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It wasn't personal just some thing I think about that why I always keep a pen an paper by myside never know when something will com to you
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great piece!!!
    Very heartfelt
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we try but can't change the dail of a lovers hand
    and the friend mind ....heart felt flow
     
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    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got a friend she ina situation but she pushin me away cuz he dun lyk me, and iz prolly a lil scared of me. I just pray she knos i care and that he kno I will wedge my foot deep in his monkey.... whew got my blood pressure up but im touchin home wit this piece 4real
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all you can do is pray that she make out alive and strong minded
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: By The Hands

    Now this is a sad story but so true for many abused women. Very nicely written.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!
    this so real and prevelant
    love this piece
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight piece

    My lord, this is so sad.
     
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