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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Nov 4, 2004.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is he worth my patience
    and dedication?
    will he appreciate me
    if i give him those peices
    that he may seem worth
    but prolly isnt
    does his self knowlede
    and curiousity
    change wit the infuence of his age
    verse me
    i wonder how long this will last
    before it even begins
    i wonder if we will even evolve past friends
    i kno
    his name
    his age
    .... his wants and desires
    and yet
    im still awaiting the patience
    i will hopefully oneday have
    to uncover his secrets
    to lift his layers
    to be underneath all his fears
    and be absorbed
    in his heart.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    what u pose here is deep and mentally wrap
     
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    ...they say
    Patience is a virtue...
    and love is always
    worth the wait...

    flow on poet...
    Sage
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One never knows for sure, and this is a scary place to be...But it's also a wondrous, exciting place to be as well. I found myself shaking my head in agreement throughout this piece...Flow on poet.
     
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    thanks fam
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome sis...........