Khasm13 : butterfly....

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  1. Khasm13

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    floating on windstreams of warm air above everything green
    sweet pollen surrounded by supple scents of jasmine is the scene
    there is an overabundance of sun to dance...in, bathe'n in a light stream
    no need for a sun screen...i was waiting for the summer since locked in my cocoon's magical dream...

    i stay busy below the billowing clouds and birds casting bold shrouds
    from flower to flower i parlay...the old fashioned way...doing mother nature proud
    looking for petals to pearch upon with color combinations thas loud
    do you see what i see?
    it's a supersized sunflower beconing me to sow it's seeds
    swaying in the wind...begging for me to come in
    if my mouth wasn't such the sucker...i would grin
    the stigma is so big...i don't even know where to begin
    resting my gold and brown wings while predatory birds sing
    no other butterfly stands were i stand presently...so i gorge myself like a king
    drinking the nectar of the gods as the beatles waddle underneath rotten logs
    not even knowing the important cog my existance serves
    after my feast is complete...i soar on a warm current...ever watchful for spiders and birds...
    this is a daily story of mines...and i have 54 more days before i'm canned like a past tense verb...
    but as long as i live...fertility is my word

    floating on windstreams of warm air above everything green
    sweet pollen surrounded by supple scents of jasmine is the scene
    there is an overabundance of sun to dance...in, bathe'n in a light stream
    no need for a sun screen...i was waiting for the summer since locked in my cocoon's magical dream...
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaah yessssssssss....something to make me come out of retirement :D

    Love the majestically, outdoorsy feel of this piece...
    such strong imagery, whoa...I like that
    I HAD to drop some love inside this flow...
    this is one of those pieces that compells one to read,
    compells one to reply...and then compells one to write!

    Do ya thang...
    1luv, Sage
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    OH YEA?

    then my job is done...... :coffee:
    thanks for the love sage...and i will be looking for that new piece ms. buzy body...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    ooh I was feeling this...glad the butterfly pushed this poem out of its cocoon... :welldone:
     
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    Wonderful rhymes and vivid earthy imagery make this write a joy to read. Loved the way you posed this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man the beauty of this sweet release was awesome
    fly on inside that dreamin cocoon
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've never seen you flow like this, Khasm. I am so impressed! Just beautiful.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love this wow i was on the wind with you awesome feeling awesome vibe

    peace
    Angel
     
  9. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gosh Khasm,
    I saved the best for last...
    my last reply to the best piece I read today.
    I was just dreaming away while sipping from this nectar, floating all away up there, feeling comfortable, happy to be alive. The dreamer in me is captivated.
    ok, I'll just keep quiet now otherwise I'll just continue talking about dreamy stuff.

    This was Beautiful!!
    :heart: moham
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it put me on a cloud looking down seeing all this happen
     
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