Black Poetry : Butterfly Wings and Petals

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Dec 15, 2007.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Actually,
    Someone must have conjured
    up a perpetual broom
    cause you continue to sweep
    me off my feet and into your kingdom
    Nesting with you, makes it hard
    to breathe, so much love, not enough room
    I long to expand, and break out of this
    cocoon, to flower, and blossom

    I want you to be able to experience
    every colorful nuance of my rainbow
    as my butterfly wings kiss every petal
    appreciating each pink, purple, and yellow
    I desire you to inhale the alluring fragrance
    that snares you and dares you to follow

    Could you savor the nectar be it bitter or sweet?
    Feelings and emotions, impossible to diminish
    So delicate, like butterfly wings and petals
    and so hard to express, like this poem I can't finish...
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you dont mind.


    The feeling I get wrapped in your arms
    how sweet the kisses and whispers the sighs
    how lovely it feels to float and to lie
    on the softness and sweetness of
    butterfly wings and Petals.


    OK just had to add a lil thatgirl flava.
    I I love it.
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Danggggg......watz.....
    THIS IS AWESOME....
    I could read this over and over
    and over. lol I am sure I will....
    done read it 3 times b/4 this post
    Im not going to try to pick a favorite
    verse the ENTIRE pieces moves me
    I really, really enjoyed this.
    Your pen is truely amazing.


    Much Luv
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No I don't mind at all thatgirl, in fact, I loved the lines you penned. Thank you poetess.
    You humble me 4Everluv, I sort of let this piece just end suspended in a way, so I wasn't sure if it would be relatable to many. I so appreciate your praises sis, truly.
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sister waiz
    I totally agree. This flow is soooo awesome
    Wooooowwwww! I enjoyed reading and feeling
    this flow. I had to come back because I needed to say that
    This poem hit a gentle spot that needed a tug. and to say Thank you for sharing sis. Very nice read

    Peace~N~Love
     
  6. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Poem Sister Watzinaname
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why Blue, I am so happy that this piece touched a gentle spot within you. Your words mean much to me sister, thank you.
    Thank you much, Platinumillity, Miss Poet of the Week!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    been gone for a minute but to return to see the passion written from your poetic hands...........what a wonderful write...........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling this joint here ...great write
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why thank you nevar for that sweet response. Nice to "see" you in the forum again.
    Good to know you're feeling this joint, thank you Rich.
     
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