Black Poetry : ~*Butterflies*~

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby, you get me so excited
    I can't stop it no matter how hard I try
    But whenever I'm around you
    I always get the butterflies
    I'm not sure exactly what you do
    That always gets me this way
    But I never know what to do
    I never know what to say
    All I know is that
    I love the way the butterflies feel
    Fluttering around in my stomach
    As if they were real
    I get them when you whisper sweet-nothings
    I get them whenever we touch
    I get them whenever I'm with you
    Baby, I love you so much
    Nobody in my life
    Has ever made me feel this way
    For the rest of my life
    I'd gladly spend it with you everyday
    Baby, you get me so excited
    I can't stop it no matter how hard I try
    But whenever I'm around you
    I always get the butterflies..*
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That nervous, giddy, joyous feeling, you described them so well. I enjoyed this write. Flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was warm and gentle thankz
     
  4. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im glad u guyz enjoyed it as well as i enjoy urs!!!
     
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    nice flow i enjoyed this one alot...Angel
     
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    re:Butterflies

    Excellent. I have felt one or two of those butterflies within my lifetime.
     
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    yes indeed leaves a warm feeling inside truely enjoyed this