Black Poetry : Butterflies

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Mar 9, 2004.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My heart thumps
    And stomach turns over
    Loss for words
    Thoughts of kisses flutter in my mind

    Sweaty palms
    Unrehearsed motions
    I try to maintain,
    Express this overwhelming emotion
    Every time you’re near
    Butterflies
    Butterflies
    I can’t stand spiders
    But I am horrified
    Of these butterflies
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is nice, sistah...i felt this deep...
    :heart:love,
    -story
     
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    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply sweet.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That nervous, giddy, loving feeling, you described it well.
     
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