Black Poetry : Butt

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mrron, Jan 22, 2007.

  1. mrron

    mrron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem is from my first poetry book called The Face on The Clock Has A Smile

    Butt

    Oh! Black lady, what's that underneath your dress? Causing a commotion, creating sexual stress
    The way you shake from left to right explains why I'm confused
    If I don't touch that part of your anatomy soon, I'm going to blow a fuse

    The earth shakes, the stars twinkle, when you throw that thing in gear
    We're going to need a larger facility now, 'cause that part won't fit in here
    Whatever you're taking to make you shake like that, I'll take a case or two
    My eyes are wide open, I don't dare blink, 'cause I don't want to miss a clue

    If you shake like that one more time, I'll have to give the other girl's up
    I'm just a temporary visitor here, but I'll stay if you'll be my buttercup
    Don't bend over, it might cast a shawdow, like the total eclipse of the sun
    If you shake any faster, it might change the weather, and for cover I'll have to run

    Everytime you wiggle your bottom like that, it puts my mail on hold
    I'm trying to see this in a positive light, now where are the tickets to next show sold?
    When you walk like that it's so erotic and propels my rocket to the moon
    I have a flower in my garden to give to you, I'll have a love bird deliver it soon

    Don't be offended or take it personally, by my description of your erotic moves
    If I were a car, I'd overheat and blow a gasket and drive outside the groove
    Don't misunderstand me, I like sexy girls and getting down to the real "nitty gritty"
    But I'd rather watch you do your sexy walk, than the sky line of New York City
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that's what under da skirt will do ....
    from da walk to the talk the way she sway
    and how her eyez play will send u in over drive

    awesome scribe here .......lovin this
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mrron, mrron:
    Now that flo was too cute.:)


    Much Luv
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was neat the way you layed this out, it made me smile.
    nice drop poet.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You certainly was being entertained. I enjoyed this scribe of playful praises.
     
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    Thanks to all who commented on my poem.
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Watermelon in the back pocket", or "fruity pebbles in those jeans" Dress it up however you like, I see you have an affinity for Black gluteus maximus. Creative write... do ya thang:spinstar:

    :hearts2:

    :picture:

     
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    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    concise, descriptive, & aptly titled - this was well done & i enjoyed the pace. :dance:
     
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