Black Poetry : butt on your back

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, May 30, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    u sit there
    with that smirk on your face
    sista
    like u can't remember
    what it was like
    to have the drama
    from a brother.

    you got a man
    is what u say
    but just cuz he's with u now
    don't mean he will stay
    and still sista
    u hang onto the notion that
    since u have this nugga
    u have ur butt on your back..

    and turn ur mouf up
    at another sistas struggle
    as if you are sheer perfection
    and better than another.

    well let me tell u sista
    don't u dare pretend
    just cuz u got a man
    that u can now stand

    and toss your prissy head
    mz educated mind
    so educated, miseducated
    and dumb at the same time.

    u like so many others
    have search for his soul
    he got your world in his hands
    and will one day let go.

    so don't snub you nose
    like u didn't taste the fat
    cuz u may think that your free
    but actually, your trapped.
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LET EM KNOW!! LET EM KNOW!! I like this poem right HERE! It's so skillfully written had to read it twice. I enjoyed it even more the second time round. Until next time peace unto you and keep flowin!! :):):)
     
  3. Destee

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    Sister More ... you okay ?? ... :love: ... Destee Loves Ya!

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    Very Nice Flow!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    More,,gurl that was the TRUTH...Hit em wit it! Beautiful flow
     
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