Black Poetry : But You Don't Know That

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  1. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Traces of you still
    Lingering near
    Excited by the
    Thought of you
    Becoming the light
    In my eyes, for you
    Have captured my
    Heart
    Finding myself
    Thriving off of
    That light
    I'm calling out
    Your name...Love,
    Can you hear me?
    Love, I need you...
    Can you hear me?
    Can't seem to shake
    What you do to me
    Look at me, dancing
    On the anticipation
    Of when you return
    To me
    Bless me with your
    Presence....
    Wanting to feel the
    Touch of your lips
    Wanting to feel you
    Close to me
    Please, bless me....
    Hmmm...making me
    Want to get caught
    Up in you
    Savoring the thought
    Of becoming one with
    You
    I can hardly breathe
    When I'm near you
    So intoxicating,
    So captivating,
    Mesmerizing me
    Love, I want you...
    Can you hear me?
    I want to somehow
    Live in your heart
    I want to die in
    Your eyes
    I want to subside
    In you
    Love, I love you...
    But you don't know
    that


    kaslis, copyright 2001
    all rights reserved
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LISTER....

    thank you dear friend... for leaving this one
    behind for me!! :) this is definitely one Sunshyne
    can relate to... yesssss!! indeed!!

    AlwaysLove...
     
  3. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Daaaamn!!!!

    That was deep!!! I could feel the love...i felt the love. You might want to tell the love... I'm feelin dhat.
     
  4. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...I want to die in your eyes.."

    If love cannot hear you
    Then I don't know who will

    This is so beautiful Lister...so beautiful

    *hear*
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmone

    no one can say it better than--
    musiq soulchild...
    with maybe the exception of--
    LISTER--

    (u scribin' torturous lines)

    keep bring now fire fi me to lis and vibe frum...ya'know?

    thepoetsean A.K.A wurdplai
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    IN VOICES OF LOVE SELF SPEAK
    HEARD IN WAVES
    LOVE IS A NOTION OF SOUL
    THE HEART KNOWS AS LOVE BE LOVED
    OPENNING UP FOR LOVE'S GREAT DOORS
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet sunshyne, i thank you for your constant support, dear friend. i am really glad that you can relate, you know. smiles to you, dear friend.
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shaneak, i am so glad that you enjoyed this piece, gurl. my love, already knows, for they have felt it, too.

    hunter, thank you. i await to hear my loves' calling....
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sean, i'm trying to keep up with you and your beautiful "wurdplai", dear poet. I hear ya.
    thank you, for the read.

    rich, now that is simply beautiful. i thank you also, for the read, dear poet.
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep beautiful beautiful piece...glad to bring it back...
     
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