Black Poetry : But U 4gave Him (Dedicated to my girl Anesha King)

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why are u still with yo *****,
    He ain't doin nothin 4 ya,
    He ain't tryin to support ya,
    Or ya son, he ain't got nothin,
    So what u with him 4,
    He cheated on ya many times,
    And u just findin out those lies,
    Dat he be tellin u, behind yo back,
    He tellin all his friends about u,
    Talkin dis smack and dat smack,
    Tryin to get dem to screw u,
    Then whatchu gonna do,
    Ya gonna be knocked up again,
    Havin somebody else's kid,
    Then u take a blood test,
    And findin out da baby ain't even his,
    I don't want u goin through dat,
    And u know it,
    U know how sad dis is,
    Very disappointin,
    U let yo man back in yo home,
    Like ya'll one happy family,
    And he just got out of jail,
    From punching u in yo stomach while u was pregnant,
    What kind of man is he,
    Not a real man,
    He doesn't know no betta,
    He don't understand what love really is,
    But u 4gave him,
    I don't see it,
    He ain't no good 4 ya,
    U can do much betta,
    I'm not willing 2 let dis go on much further,
    So now its time 4 u to take over,
    Leave him today, he will neva change his ways.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we see without seeing
    da blind emotions control da heart
    yet of love a true friend make a stand
    seeing through da myth of one's heart
    speaketh unto thou ear so forth one may hear

    what seem good not so good at all
    the mental must move forward before self destruction
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks rich, ya know, i tried to give her my advice, but she says she still loves da man, but she knows she can cry on my shoulder.:)

    AM
     
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    i was in situation like this once. and i learned that all you can really do to a horse is lead it to the water. you can't make him drink it. so just keep on being there for her to lean on. it means more to her than you could probably imagine. trust me, i know but this was good though. i like how you worded it. nice job, poet!
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4 sho kimdricka, i'm just keepin it real.

    1 luv,

    AM
     
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