Black Poetry : But Still

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See I don’t know what’s goin on…
    But the rain seems to keep comin down
    As the clouds cover the sky..
    The sun seems to still rise
    Out of the dark…
    And the rose still shine
    This tension and hatred
    Is driving me crazy…..
    All in a hazy trying to understand
    But the rose is still growing
    Bold in color
    Strong outside
    But falling apart on the inside
    But the rose is still growing
    Walkin and walkin
    Stronger…… stronger…..even stronger
    It’s a lesson within every season
    But the reason is unknown
    See the rose is still growing
    Laughing crying
    In heart ache and out
    For the joy lies….
    Profound in its own
    He says she say
    Turmoil and drama
    But the rose is still growing
    Stronger and stronger..
    Blooming like never before
    Within is held the power to over come
    Evil and all the trying times
    I don’t know if it is a poem
    But my fingers seem to do there own thing
    To spread a little message
    If it have meaning fine if not fine…
    Climbing and growing
    Stronger
    Stronger
    Even stronger
    But it’s a creation of my mind running thoughts
    And the rose is still growing
    Weathering the storm...
    (C) 2004
     
  2. kountrysoul

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    WOW! :luv: i'm growing more and more attached to the beauty of poetry, and yours is oh so wonderful...............i may not be the rose, but i grow too...............and i'm blooming for all to see........i loved this one......continue on.......... :lips:
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the rose that grew from the concrete..... to me this represent the truth that positve things still are possibble in a world ran by negativ eones... thanks for this drop mba....thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 up tyte dis one got me rising up fast like da rose
    flow on now !!!!!!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MzBlkAngel...

    Still growing....cousins with Still I Rise. Beautiful.

    What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger...grow stronger.

    :thanks: for sharing your enlightenments with us...your Fam.

    :toast:
     
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    Those who contemplate the beauty of the earth find reserves of strength that will endure as long as life lasts.

    Continue to focus on the beauty of that Rose...

    Nice flow!
     
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    That was awesome Mz....had my heart on swell!!! :roll: :luvv:
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kountrysoul..thank you for your support and reply..welcome to the family as well...enjoy as we all grown in our on special ways!!!!!thanks for letting me know you understood :)

    daroc..indeed thanks for the love on dis...thanks for letting me know you understood :)

    $$RICH$$..thank you for the love...glad you enjoyed it and had that vibe...
    stonger and stronger indeed!!!!!!!and thanks for letting me know you understood :)

    Monetary..thanks for the warm love and support on dis scribe..happy you enjoyed and understood

    angelicsage..within is the strength one have to want to grow stronger..thanks for the peep in....

    Muse..thanks for the love and support you give so freely in my scribes....
    happy you enjoyed!!!!!


    Peace my destee fam
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a poem to me, a poem of strength that is growing even stronger.
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooohhhh myyyyyy!
    what a concept, and beautifully laid. this is a treasure, sister.
     
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