Black Poetry : But Instead, I Chilled/A Collaboration by Keita & Watz

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keita

    I wanted to write you, delight you, ignite you...
    I even thought of words I knew would excite you.
    I thought to fufill your spirit ever more,
    or blow your mind with visions like none's done before.
    I wanted to dip into your soul like the MilkyWay,
    and leave you utterly speechless on the loudest of days...
    Have you call my name as you bend to pray,
    and tell the Lord forever that you want me to stay...
    But Instead, I chilled.

    I chilled because I already heard your heart quake,
    saw your thighs melt like butter from an easy bake,
    heard you tell me no and then beg me to take,
    every quiver, every drop, every thrust, every shake...
    That my dear will have to wait just a while,
    cause making you surrender, not taking is my style.
    I seek to captivate you, make your sweat pour like rain,
    make you scream out in pleasure from the joy of the pain,
    make your mouth taste like honey as you call out my name,
    and know nothing in your life will ever be the same...
    But instead, I chilled.

    I chilled because I craved you red hot,
    wanted you to have what you thought you could not,
    wanted you warm, smooth, silky and wet,
    in every way possible so you'd never forget.
    I wanted you the same way you took me,
    which is why these words I write to you must be...
    which is why my pen has lost control,
    and the reason now that I write my soul...
    But instead, I chilled.

    Watz

    I wanted to enwrap, entwine, enthrall you...
    Knew the precise phrases to capture all of you
    I wanted to burn, sear, set aflame
    your poetic candle at both ends
    so that you'd never read poetry the same
    How I would dip you inside my nebula of stardust
    and cosmically erupt that lingering lust
    Thanking the Lord above for sending me a Nubian King
    A brotha of regality that could make my heart sing,
    But instead, I chilled

    I chilled cause I already heard your mellow moan
    Saw your jaw set taut like it was made of stone
    Put a hex on your mind that sent you into the twilight zone
    While you scratched the itch that wouldn't leave you alone
    I want you badly, but I want you to wait even more
    I need you to beg, plead, and yes, implore
    For I seek to stiffen you harder than any limb in the petrified forest,
    Have those tired muscles aching til you won't know which is sorest
    Make your mouth water and salivate as only I can
    Drooling like a baby, from being pleasured like a man
    But instead, I chilled

    I chilled cause I wanted you to latch on tighter than a leech
    So I dangled my candy til it just barely escaped your reach
    I wanted you pulsating and throbbing, almost ready to burst
    for although my cup was overflowing, I was still dying of thirst
    I wanted you to take my all and turn me completely out
    Show me, school me in what pure passion is all about
    The ink of my simmering sensuality won't leave my quill alone
    And so now I must make all my private yearnings known
    But instead, I chilled
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOW, THIS IS HOTT TO DEATH....

    I am really, really, feeln' this flo. FLO ON......
    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can't see how
    y'all gonna chill
    from this red hot thrill

    this was mad tyte do it up poet's whewwwww!!!!
     
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    I am TRULY lovin' this!! DANG!!! :D
     
  5. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    man, that's amazing....a killa collabo...very vivid images.....yall absolutely nailed the longing, the waiting game....had me longing to experience these feelings.....

    this one played like a movie.......im waitin on the sequel.....lol
     
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    That was truly hot. Nice imagery and wondeful flo.
     
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    "i wanted to enwrap, entwine, enthrall.." sis... you need to bottle that and sell it to the masses... and bro keita you did aiight too... lol... anyhoo.. i loved the callabo... needs to be more...
     
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    I wanted to say what a awesome collab this was...
    but instead ... I chilled
    I wanted to smile and say:welldone: , when I inhaled this piece...
    but instead ... I chilled

    I chilled because I wanted to enjoy and marinate the beauty that it captures, because I wanted to take the time to give it, it's due props...
    And to gracefully give a :bowdown: to this great work of art.
     
  9. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Watz, I want to thankyou for the wonderful job you did to compliment and complete this work. You Are Indeed My Poetic Partner !! We are going to have to do this on audio to complete this work as it should be. Are you down?

    I also want to thank everyone for posting to this collaboration. I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed doing it. I look forward to more of this in the future.

    ONCE AGAIN, THANK YOU AND MAY EVERYONE BE BLESSED !!!
     
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    my, my, what a tight collab flo on poets.
     
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