Black Poetry : busy schedule

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dnommo, Apr 11, 2001.

  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there are times when I can’t
    see you through the confusion
    when my life and my goals
    cover the visions I have of you

    there are times when I can’t
    see the smile that waits for
    me, when my dreams of today
    are full of our destiny

    there are times when I wish
    that the days would be less
    so that I could hold close
    and your face I would caress

    but I know that I must have
    patient as each day falls away,
    for the time will come when
    we can love in every way

    so as you rest your eyes tonight
    I pray that your dreams are sweet
    for I know that the time for ‘us’
    will be when our destiny’s roads meet
     
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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    through the confusion
    and the distance...
    i support you
    & i believe in you....i stand on that...

    I love you...

    ~smiling at ya~
     
  3. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks ma waitin for ya
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D & 8th...

    umm... 'scuse me... is it alryght if i enter...
    i have my hands over my eyes... :lol:

    this was really sweet! & i just wanted to say
    that... now! you can get back to whateva it is
    you were doin'... (lol)

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there are some pieces that are just past the threshold of love...this is one of them

    one love, blak
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA :eeek: oh my we didn't see you come in.... well ummm, you don't hafta cover your eyes cuz we decent :D:

    thanks for the read...
     
  7. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes my man

    liking how you laid this down
    nice piece MO
     
  8. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so'ja man...imma waitin' for some more of your scribes man....
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin Dhat

    That was just...beautiful...I'm in tears over hear. I felt the love..the certainty. That is just so sweet.
     
  10. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shaneak,

    i am honored by your words and i offer you a tiisue for your tears...
     
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