Black Poetry : busted...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Mar 13, 2002.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SOMETHING DIFFERENT, Y'ALL:
    {not to be confused with "darkness came over me" that's coming soon}.

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    a darkness came over me
    as i watched from an alley across the way
    her sitting there
    sipping her drink
    as he caressed her free hand

    how dare she

    consumed by pains
    worse than birth pains
    i stood there
    seething with rage
    as smoldering fires burned deep within me

    how would she

    return his kisses
    ...his touches
    why am i looking at this
    shoulda brought my nine
    ...finish them both off

    how could she

    {as i drove home...i thought}

    daily
    she would lie down with me

    was that before or after him

    on a whim
    i decided to follow her
    ...to watch her
    but i didn't expect this

    she betrayed my trust
    ...told me there would always be US
    lied to me
    said she loved me
    and only me

    how could i have been so naive
    in my judgment of her
    how could this happen
    i thought i knew her

    i could sense the distance
    ...thought it was a female thang
    you know
    PMS'ing in her mood swings.
    then she started going
    here
    there
    everywhere
    just wanted to see where EVERYWHERE was
    other than that...i didn't care.

    how could she?

    how could she do this to me?

    "honey...i'm home."

    ****!
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My!My!My!

    I like it!!
    Very nice!!:)
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nothin like a cold slap in the face!
    somthin like this is hard to take.
    nice work.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  4. Tenay

    Tenay Active Member MEMBER

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    Nice work! I like it!
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm,

    :look: Interesting flow.



    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    things are turning on us, bruthaz...now they got us peeping 'round corners...trying to see what we see. what we gon' do?

    THANKS for the love.
     
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