Black Poetry : Business Partners

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, May 12, 2011.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as the three sharks turn around to look at Howard

    eve :

    i'll see you at the Pacquiao fight tonight

    alright?

    howard :

    alright Eve

    Howard leaves the room

    as he does one of the sharks get up to close the door behind him

    “click”

    Howard turns around to look at the door

    then noticing the door handle jiggling as if the shark is checking to make sure the door is locked

    howard :

    must be a private meeting

    while walking down the flight of stairs

    he notices that his reason to be tight

    was unaware of Eve's signature

    aw ......... shucks!!!!!!!!!

    running back up the stairs

    i shouldn't have let her out of my sight

    this isn't fair

    Eve!!!!! Eve!!!!!!!

    the door opens

    eve :

    Howard what is it?

    howard :

    i thought ….

    well … i guess it’s nothing

    are you okay?

    eve :

    sure we’re just going over some new ideas for this commercial i’m shooting

    you can stay if you want

    howard :

    no i guess i’d better go

    as long as you’re okay …..

    eve :

    hey Howard since you’re back i need to talk to you about something

    howard :

    okay

    Eve gets up to leave

    you three behave now

    the door shuts behind Eve & Howard

    shark #1 :

    must be a private greeting

    shark #2 :

    must be

    i wonder if we’ll get private seating

    like we did when we got invited to the Tenessee Valley Fair

    remember?

    shark#1 :

    how could i forget

    you were to tight to enjoy the fare

    shark #2 :

    and you were to tight to enjoy the fair

    shark #3 :

    guys guys

    the important thing to remember is that i was light enough to enjoy what was fair

    shark #2 :

    here we go


    Eve shaking hands with the shark

    shark #3 :

    do you know how long i’ve waited to be aware of a signature like yours

    eve :

    i’m flattered guys

    game booth guy :

    aw …… shucks!!!!!!!

    Eve and the three sharks turn around

    he shattered all of the shooting records

    i should’ve followed my insight

    i knew that guy could shoot the lights out

    this isn’t fair

    howard :

    Eve!!!!!! Eve!!!!!!

    [Howard waving]

    [shark #3 snapping his fingers]

    now that’s what i should’ve thought of

    teddy bears





    love,

    eve & howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice drop howard
     
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    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    howardtsu,

    This series is a stroke of genius. I haven't a clue how you made these nuggets of gold work. And they work both ways, perfectly. (Reading first line to last and then last line to first.) I enjoyed them all, tremendously.
    I look forward to the next installment.

    Totalview
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $$rich$$

    thanks totalview

    it's been a while i like the new format
     
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