Black Poetry : Bus Chronicles#2: A trip to tha dentist

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bus Stop Chronicles are seperate pieces, and dont string together from previous flows...


    Inside his sexual cavity
    He had me…
    Trying to dig out my nougat with his

    Tongue

    Allowing the glaze over my curvaceous waves…
    To fill the pocket of his

    Sweet Tooth

    Hips rounded smoothly beneath his
    Ooooh la la,
    As he pierced me

    With shaking vibrations of sexual magnetic force
    Pulsing, thumping, blood rushing to my

    Cabin

    Of warm banana bread, and cantaloupes
    Sipping international coffees
    Laced with
    Chocolate truffles and raspberry mouse

    Politely

    Accepting the creamer from my special tin…
    Slurping it lovingly, anxious to get to the bottom of my

    Cup


    The movie plays on repeat, as he spies on me
    From tha back of tha bus…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwww!!! what a picture u painted i was sitting there to the left

    ready to crash on the alart of ya whispers.....this was sweet as apple pie !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diggin the title, makes me see the dentist in a totally different light. How creative and sensually fun, tight write here.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    dang girl my bad

    forget the digits

    i see you get right to work playa playa:bowl::bazooka::10900:
     
  5. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh stop it! LOL, You are too funny!! The VERY first thing I say at the top is that these " are seperate pieces and dont string from previous flows" You a trip!!!


    :qqb023:
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew! I didn't know whether to eavesdrop in or go fix me a plate! LOL

    You have a way with metaphors which makes your pieces even more interesting! Great job and keep 'em coming!
     
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